Author please drop the discord link...!!
Good novelMust readLike to storyAnd character
E um bom romance. Tem um ritmo fluido que fãs com que a progressão seja rápida má também não fica corrido. Além dos personagens que vão crescendo e amadurecendo ao decorrer da trama, dando mais profundidade.
so the story has great talent, no doubt, with the way you keep writing and the daily update. in time, this book will come to be among the greatest of novels.
Peak! ✋??What a great novel, I love how the plot and characters develop. More chp pls
the storyline is exciting and not boring, i supeeeer like it >///<
The story itself is rather enjoyable. Rather quick paced with very little to no filler. He basically gets a day of rest before he needs to go back into action. The universe isn’t overly unique, but still fairly developed. The side characters aren’t super devloped. They feel more like place holders while the MC does his thing. The most glaring issues are the terrible grammar and continuity. Plural and conjugation errors abound. Definitely in need of a proofreader. People and things are spelt one way then changed mid chapter. And then there are random ramblings interjected in the middle of the story for no explicable reason. Final thoughts: interesting without the usual tropes of most cultivation novels. Which this is, it’s just set in space with science and technology.
Was the atypical output of the sun a reason of its birth? I think not, the worm
"Wait let me guess," said Writerz.
"Yes-yes, it's Kaenjieeeee boi.... okay, let's go desu."
"Ethan your mom has called you seven times today, why haven't you picked up?!" I kept the phone against my cheek, my eyes cold and dead. "I'm sorry dad, just a little busy with college work." My father new better to believe me, especially when he knew how easily depressed I got. "Ethan, listen to me, and listen closely. Sarah is dead. we all have to accept it..." I felt my body start to shake, "Why do we have to accept it, the body hasn't been found yet, she c-"
(Shieek!!)(Shiieek!!)