The story idea is good but it’s way over descriptive at boring irrelevant points and under descriptive at the interesting relevant points. It is also not very realistic in behaviour. Waiting days to handover pertinent info and just not minding you’re not told how something went for days. Lost steam
I'm going to keep giving this book a go. The first few chapters have a lot of unnecessary detail and a lot of misspelled words but it seems like it might be a good read?
very god storyline, needs to be edited for grama and such, but otherwise very good. it could also do without the auther's interuptions at the end of each chapter. reading it a year later i dont need to know what was happening when you were posting...
Will u put the book in watpad
A lot of this book made me feel uncomfortable reading. Hated the point that a virgin is better than someone experienced, that’s such an outdated idea and shouldn’t be pushed
very good read
Love the book so far can’t wait for more chapters wish each update had two chapters or more at a time to hold us over until the next day but I get it the author has other stuff going on so I appreciate that we at least get a chapter a day and not have to wait as much for the next
ending forced by the platform due to lack of update. Complete the work as we spend time and money reading the book and waiting for the real ending of the story.
great, u convinced me to read this book here
Hopefully chapters are released sooner. Was very interested in this book.
Thanks for updating 5 chapters a day but it is not enough. I am very eager to read the whole story, please don't drag it any further. Also one full chapter for just a restaurant lunch with a coach is a bit excessive, it is too long with unnecessary details. Apart from that, I am loving it !
An interesting and intriguing story now contradicting it's own previous facts. Definitely giving it up reading. For the sake of twists don't change your initial beliefs and facts.