[Review after reading 11 chapters]This actually isn't too bad in its own genre.The premise itself is a bit generic, but the way it's got to it is something I thought was unique.The grammar is weird sometimes, sentence structure could be better and the strangest thing I noticed was that the storytelling voice, the narration, sometimes dips into the extreme casual.And it sometimes treats the reader as if he were stupid and also, the story is full of exposition, just telling us 'This is how it is' instead of trying to use another method of convey this information.Story-wise I have only a few complaints, which have may have been resolved in the next twenty other chapters I haven't read.!SPOILERS!This is, to me, the weirdest thing.This is the third and last attempt that Rishi, the MC, has to pass the exam to get a Book of Contracts. He's hurt and instead of trying to get healthy before attempting the exam, he just rushes in. Why?Rishi himself was surprised when he found out that he was healed when he was teleported into the exam arena.So, I assumed that he didn't know, or wasn't sure that he would be.Why is he rushing so hard to get it done, even while hurt?And secondly, there doesn't seem to be a downside to the two types of contracts one can have with a beast when choosing the servant variety.You could be normal friends with your beast, just as with the partner one, but still have the servant one chosen, so that it cannot leave or disobey you.
I belive Ive read this novel before on royalroad. They stopped translating awhile ago. Hopefully you are translating it.??????????
Great read overall ........but there's just a lot of jabs to other novels, pok*mon, movies ...etc. that it started funny at first but as the story moves forward i kinda got tiered with all the ranting. I mean when all the action is going on... the MC will get lost in his own thoughts comparing his story with whatever anime/novel fits, pulling u out of the focus on the story.
why is it on the male section sigh bro i don't like Yuri ?or i have to say it's very taxing to imagine Yuri boring
Novel over 3000 raw chapters hopefully this gets picked up although the beginning is hard to read it gets better ??????????????????
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???This book is so well written.. wow...got me hooked from the first chapter.. five stars because it deserves it. keep going author.???
500 chapter is and the conclusion it's:trash...yep kind of trash ,i regret Reading it, the translation it's decent,the story it's repetitive (like 70% it's just useless filler information )the kingdom building it's quite nice actually but romance...it doesn't exist ,also kant killed quite few "beautiful girl/women"i can say he has a sadistic pleasure in killing girls...yea it's a trash novel, in final it's so repetitive and it's gets boring.
so is this book dead or what? i haven't seen any information about it for some time now. so i am just a bit curious because it was interesting enough to give a shot
Great premise, satisfying plot and stable updates. There have been some complaints that this story is too generic, but I would disagree, MC continually levels up through hardship and hard work, but it's not like there are young masters left and right coming out to be face slapped. My only complaint would be that the progress of the story is slow, but if you're thinking of picking up this novel, I would highly recommend it as you will have a thousand chapters to read which are highly enjoyable. (You don't have to wait 12 hours for an update like a junkie like me)I would say that the enjoyability of this novel is on par with Versatile Mage, although the subtle meaning of the plot is less so. Please pick this up so it doesn't get discontinued!
I'm sick of reading these kind of novels.It have been going on for months now so stop.......................................................
This story was so good.... the mc had amazing character.....Then a fantasy world became Chinese.....racism became a major part (because if it is clans then it's just rich people who don't care about others and their own less fortunate family members in their race for resources but when it's Nations then everyone is together in their "righteousness") The author wrote a good story. It was poisoned by making it insulting to all audiences but one. We love the fictional characters because they are COMPLETELY separate from our reality. Don't send our issues to them