where did you go please finish such a nice twist compared to the usual
This review is based on the free chapters.It has a similar concept to Trafford's Trading Club (buy anything as long as you can pay for it), and although I like such settings, I'm personally not a super big fan of this novel. It's okay, but I find the biggest problem is that I'm not a fan of how much killing is going on and how arrogant the MC is as soon as he obtains the power of the Bank. I'm never a big fan of characters that solve all their problems through brute force and killing. Idk, it just makes it feel a little lackluster, especially if the entire novel is just going to be like this, collecting debts by killing people until the succumb. This type of novel is also the type that seems like it can easily become repetitive. Trafford's Trading Club was much better, it actually had some very moving stories, meanwhile this is just so... mediocre in comparison (that being said, they are quite different despite having the similar setting of buying whatever you desire).
I am really enjoying a story where the "MC" can only influence things for his clan. Also the passage of time will be fun I think. The development of the first generation of kids is pretty good, and you get a sense this story has a solid foundation for the future.
Interesting. So far I have only read a few chapters but what should I say? I am hooked. The setting is also cool. Great work, highly recommended
please continue posting new chapters on it is a waste if just drop it. is a good and nice novel make sure to continue this novel hope the creator hear me
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This book looked promising. I like the element in which the novel protray. It's not food per say and it's not too bad. the grammar need to be improved a little.
Impressive. To put such a new and interesting take on this saturized genre, is surely a feat worth mentioning. Might just be the difference between a hobby and a professional writer? Even then this quality of writing is not normally seen that often on this plattform. I cannot wait to see, where the story takes the protagonist. Great work! Keep it up
Although it is dropped, everything about this novel is perfect. One of the best #SecondChance novels out there. Sometimes it seems slow in progress but you will never feel bored of it, rather like it. The pace of the plot-even if it's slow or fast, it doesn't matter in this story as you will love it either way.
Fun read, only a few errors concerning names and pronouns, but nothing to distracting
This book is something else, love it sooo much
34 chapters 3-9-23