Loved it ..... Well written
Starting few chapters was alright while MC was behaving a ignorant for comic relief
But gradually the story and MC's personality upgraded splendidly and MC portrayed an reliable and intelligent side. Gradually but speedingly reaching OP level.
Will never regret reading this
I m slowly unlocking the chapters using pass and I wish someday I could catch up with the normal updates
The first thing that stands out is beautiful writing. It's very emotional and quite exquisite read. The writer did a fine job in picturing the main character's emotion, as it flows nicely and is immensely descriptive, as personally, I somehow could feel his sorrow and emotion in quite vivid details. Dave Dalton as the main character, is a well-written and quite multi-dimensional character, an interesting character. His love for his late fiancé is what I like most in this story. In short, it's definitely a very good read for those who are into hopeless romance.
Love the novel especially the interaction with the system and the fact the mc seem fun with some personality
This story was generic Mary Sue fun… however after chapter 354 the author seems to have become lazy and basically reset the story and directly ripped off the plot of ‘the most generous master ever’with some name changes…. There’s no point in reading it anymore just read the other novel..
I'm not usually a fan of game-themed, stories, but...At first, I thought that Hiro (the MC) was an annoying entitled brat, but I found that's not the case. Rather, after I noticed why he was like that in the beginning, I sympathized with him a little.Futher into the story, I actually found Hiro to be rather cool and lovable at the same time. It feels weird to use those two different words to describe one person, but that's just how it is. Thank everything holy the MC doesn't have a 1D personality.The story development is solid. Not too fast, but not too slow and dragged out either. The world background is built at a nice pace instead of just thrown at the readers with a bunch of info dump, which is something I really appreciate.All in all, a fun read to pass time! If you're looking for a fun, light read, try this story out!
This is a good novel I would recommend reading it(If its to your taste)The writing is of good quality there is few grammar errors here and there but it isn't anything major(Thank you author)Character development and world building was slow but it was at a comfortable pace(You know some novels go for 100-150 chapters to have a year pass with supreme pace(which i don't like)Thank you author for that)Updating is hectic but hopefully it improves from now onSo all in all it's a good read I like hope it continues like this and it improves with timePS:This review is after reading all 50 chapters
Muy buena la novela, me preguntó si tienen algunas imágenes de como se verían las chicas se agradecería que tuvieras un discord o un capítulo donde nos muestres
I have high expectations from this novel and it has great potential.......
Historian must be really lazy to not discover MC whose not hiding at all and doing high profile things.
Anways...
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This novel is good, I like the storyline..
I could tell that the author also improve a little bit. I just hope the author can increase the word count of every chapter cause it just to short for me.
Insanely fun read. I love the source material (Hikaru no Go and League of Legends), and the characters are like ale and engaging. Story is well-paced, keeps you interested. I’m pumped to see where it’s going!
I’m really disappointed, the author stressed so much how his protagonist would start from the bottom and would have to strive to improve in both and personality, but he is still the same the same OP MC. Even if he starts from the bottom he doesn’t struggle at all, he is the most talented of all that given time will easily surpass everyone else. The author says that he is weak-willed and indecisive, but he never acts like that, even if force by the circumstances still he never acts indecisive, he immediately works his ass of. The author says one thing, but the MC’s actions say another one.
I’ve read only the first part before quitting because it was so disappointing, the author rants about something and then does the same thing. The MC never fails, easily obtain everything and his psychological development is poorly executed, he changes from weak-willed to iron-willed way to easily. And even if there is some whining in his thoughts, it is never reflected in his actions.