the storyline is very interesting. i would suggest using adequate paragraphing. even though there are a lot of cultivation novels, this one is very interesting.
Waiting for more.
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This story made me long for a feeling of brotherhood. You know just being understood at a primal level. Like you know how when we read romances we start to feel the need for romance in our lifes. Stories aren't really able to depict that with friendship.
There is a feeling that one protagnist reallly gets the other protagnist. A idealestic depiction of understanding between two people.
Not only enjoying each others compaines but struggling to achieve something which matters more than life itself together. the best thing about this story is that protagnists aren't reactionary. They work together for there own ambition not because something forces them to do that.
How many stories have people leaving friends and family to achieve there dreams instead of going along passively with the plot because someone stole your mc guffin .
read it because there is no better feeling than having ambition for something at any cost and having a friend which goes "I desire the same thing i would never give up, Brother" .Then discussing about that thing with him. Especially when you have been denied it for so long.
It's a feeling like loving to sing spending almost all waking moment perfecting the craft but everyone you know is deaf . They love you but they can't appreciate it with some passion as you and then meeting another singer.
I am intrested even though i am usually not intrested in non portal fantasy type of stories.I am actually intrested in this. It made me feel like something diffirent. Like not only i enjoyed it i also felt a need for such a brotherhood type friendship after reading the story.
Style: pretty good. not average. better than average.
Grammer: I don't know enough grammer to rate this. Wasn't able to spot mistakes.
Story It's a new and unique feeling. Prologue is one of the best things i read. Not once i looked at a character in the story and thought "what a idiot". The story isn't unique but it really conveys emotions well. It's probably something subtle i can't put my finger on.
hmmm... I think the story is quite interesting, when I write this review, I've read 20 chapterswell... I don't read novels here very often because only recently have I started using webnovel, so I can't really compare it to others, but I think the the concept of heroine being able to hear the villain's inner voice (mc of this story) is interesting. and the story line is quite interesting, so I think it's quite worth to read
It is something I would like to continue reading to see what will happen. Hope it will continue to read well. ???????????????????????????????????
Ilol the author must be high kekrkrrkkekekrkrkrkrrkrk
OK for those wanting to read a decent fantasy novel its here....but.......there are things you need to know. The author is Chinese and there will be lots of propaganda and nationalism in this novel. Things like the author outright saying that the ccp "never tells lies" and a lot and i mean a **** ton of blaming actions on people solely being capitalists. Another thing that ive noticed from the overseas novels is that they treat women like a underclass. If this was a novel about medieval times or even early 1900s id say its appropriate but its not. So its very interesting and cool concept riddles with Chinese nationalism and ***ism. Way to blow it. If anyone has a novel that is similar to this , but that isn't written by some nationalistic virgin comment below.
This is absolute garbage it wants to be a harem but it is such a freaking garbage harem burying an interesting story underneath this is just sad
The story's pacing is just about right without getting you bored if you binge it but i wish there was more detail put into world building since i sometimes get lost when a random concept or POV is on but over all a good read for so little chapters out
All right this novel great writing quality. You have good updates everyday and good world background that with some mystery insides. It has good romance, story. Butbutbutbuuuuttttt.... It has worse power level development. Power level barrier. And whacky power level of MC soooooo whacky and absurd that make it nonsense and i think i will drop this novel... Seriously how can such absurd mc still alive after all that thing happen. This novel has no sense power level on mc believe me if you want good story you can pick this. but if you do just dont think of the mc strength because this ****ty brat mc it has no sense of power level and he is so weak and pathetic to the point it absurd.
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