Huh?
"See; sister in law is only sensible. Look at you guys; both icebergs freezing us mortals." Jiang Wui supported Zhen Xiu.
Anyways, the restaurant on the inside was even more gorgeous. The round tables covered with a not-too dark and no-too-light crimson table cloth which matched the dim atmosphere. Denear took out his crest from his void ring. As the servants/restaurant staff looked at the crest, it seemed like their whole attitude changed, but not in a good way. The receptionist seemed to signal the other workers to do something or call from someone. Someone with a different outfit from the rest appeared a few minutes later. He seemed to be the boss.
"The embassy isn't a soft target."
"I was just kidding. Got you there, Yeong-ah." Mom laughed. She's also like me. Like what everyone says: like mother, like daughter.
But this time I heard exactly what she said.
After making sure the door and windows were locked, Guin started practicing his new World language. Unfortunately the house was not sound proof and anyone who passed by would hear the two voices from inside the house, leading to wrong assumptions.
It had lived in a cage and never had to find its own food!
'And who said that she needed to be the one to be directed involved in the crime?"
Waiting!!!!!!!!!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!Release it faster!
Can't continue pàst ch3.. just bad writing.No description for scenes, incoherent flow of events, no characterisation, and downright mtl level dialogue writing author has a very rudimentary understanding of writing and the language in general, should really focus on it if he wants to continue in this... at the very least check for the grammar before posting through a proofreader
Umm, the novel is really amazing in my opinion and has great potential, but it is kinda taking too long to start with the world and development and stuff, because until now I have noticed that the chapters are like 35% info dump, 20% describing the room or the clothes or whatever, 25% s*x scenes, and 20% actual story development and stuff, I would really like to focus more on the development because it becomes kinda annoying when I read a new chapter everyday only to find that 50% or something of the chapter is just info about whatever something he is using instead of just a simple description, makes me want to leave the novel until it accumulates like 500 chapters to have a decent read and get a decent development. But hey I love the story in general and can’t wait to see him being OP against the people who will find out how strong he and his family are later on, that’s why I keep waiting wanting to see what’s going to happen, but it just doesn’t go that way in the story, or it is just not moving on to see how he is going to make the city his the chamber of commerce workings or the sect and stuff like that you know. Thanks for reading my opinion, and sorry if you take offense to my criticism. (English is not my native language, so there may be grammar mistakes here and there in the comment, so sorry in advance)