I loved it. The visual imagery conjured up came easily. The characters were very sweet (bittersweet at the end). I am looking forward to the next book! ?
If you give this book a chance you wont regret it. It needs some editing, but well worth the read. I very different supernatural style book I really enjoyed it.
I love this book it's superb
Love the story. Just wish the updates were more often...
I love Julie's personality, but she broke my heart when she has sex with Preston.
The sudden twist in the events between Kesley and Julie was intriguing and it was a duex- ex- machine.
And about the part where Susanna was injured, it hurt like hell. how could people be so cruel?
I can actually related with Valentina about her love life, lol
Good read very hott
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Generic.
It follows the same line of progression as other VRMMO stories. It isn’t making waves and, frankly, it pretty much copies tropes that have been done to death.
**Trope 1: MC picks an ability or skill that's seen as useless but is actually overpowered.**
This is also a very popular isekai trope, which isn’t a surprise because VRMMO stories often feel like isekai stories where the author didn’t fully commit.
**Trope 2: The character just gets handed stuff.**
While this is somewhat acceptable in isekai stories, it’s particularly frustrating in VRMMOs. It was pretty dumb when I saw it in that shield girl story, and it’s still pretty dumb here. The author tries to justify this by saying full set armor is a reward for beating a hidden boss, but that’s lazy writing. At least in isekai, you can claim it’s a gift from an important in-world character. However, having it be a drop from a monster is just peak laziness. Anyone who has ever played a game knows that getting the specific item drop you want is extremely rare, but getting a drop that specifically benefits you or a full set of armor? Yeah, sure.
**Trope 3: Specific to VRMMOs, the MC becomes super famous on a forum board.**
You see this in pretty much every VRMMO story, so it’s not surprising to see it here. The author uses it to drop foreshadowing or to hype up the MC. While this isn’t inherently bad, it’s uncreative. The dialogue is bland, but it’s just a plot device, so whatever.
**Trope 4: Bows are useless.**
Same as Trope 1, but I’ve seen this in a bunch of light novels, not just VRMMO stories. To be frank, it’s ridiculous. Bows and arrows are one of the oldest weapons invented, dating back to the Stone Age and used worldwide. How can anyone make a story where people think it’s useless or dumb? A guy literally went into World War II with a bow and arrow and kicked ass. England required its citizens to own and train with bows for centuries. Why do light novel writers use this trope? Where is it coming from? It boggles my mind!
**Trope 5: This ties in with the "having stuff handed to him" and "bows are useless" tropes. "It's hard to use so people don’t bother with it" is just... What?**
OK, yeah, hitting a moving target takes training, and in real life, it would probably take you a couple of weeks to get good enough to use it in a real setting, but the same is true for swords. Knights trained from a young age to master swordplay. So, why is it that the MC can use bows just fine? This isn’t really explained, and even if it were, it would probably not be a good excuse anyway.
**Trope 6: The game takes your real body’s physique into account, but this somehow stops being the case at some point when it’s convenient.**
It doesn’t seem to affect other people either. Did fat neets stop existing in the future? Do only fit people who would normally have a social life play this game? Who knows?
Just to name a few tropes that stuck out to me.
The translation is fine, aside from a few mistakes or awkward wordings. Given that this is a fairly generic story that isn’t too offensive, I can understand why it might be chosen over a possibly more interesting one where people could get mad at you for messing up. At the very least, it’s not machine-translated.
The inner monologue of the MC has much to be desired. Reading it feels like I’m reading the mind of a child. Every action and thought is stated or narrated in excruciating detail. It’s not even like reading a book; it’s more like reading an action log in a video game debugger.
> Character tried to pick up stick.
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> Stick was picked up.
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> Stick was put into inventory.
Mind you, it’s not that bad, but it’s not much better. It’s a chore to read and takes me out of the story. Not that there’s much story to begin with.
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This might be one of the finest transmigration novels I've come across, but be prepared for an emotional rollercoaster. Each storyline until the recent one concludes tragically, with the main character (MC) meeting their demise, leaving the male lead (ML) heartbroken. The most wrenching moments are when we see the ML's perspective after the MC's death in each world.
However, amidst the sorrow, there's a glimmer of hope. The bond between the MC and ML showcases genuine sweetness during their time together in the arcs, even though the MC regains her goal-oriented nature upon waking up due to the system's interference. Their relationship in the present-day life is slowly evolving into something deeper, although it's not yet fully blossomed – the MC started to develop feelings for the ML after the previous arc, albeit not romantically.
What adds humor is the system's antics. To prevent Ye Yu Xuan (ML) from exposing the truth about his role in the missions, the system makes the MC interpret his dreams as bizarre, far removed from their actual content, like a dream involving chickens or similar.
So far, there have been 15 arcs and over 900 chapters, each featuring unique settings such as modern times, ancient eras, fantasy realms with mermaids, ghost adventures, cultivation journeys, zombie apocalypses, and the entertainment industry. The stories remain fresh and original, avoiding cliches.
It's been a while since I first read this MTL version, and I'm thrilled to see it being translated now.
To be honest, the story was excellent up until around chapter 200. It could have ended beautifully at that point, but unfortunately, the author chose to stretch the series by pushing the plot in an artificial direction. There were hints of this coming, but they were poorly executed and didn't quite live up to expectations. If you stop after chapter 200, it's definitely worth your time. However, what follows is lackluster and makes it nearly impossible to find satisfaction in the reading experience.
Pretty much non existent there were like 2 or 3 instances of seggs described there was some other things that were not seggs but foreplay kinda things but all in all there is less than 10 instances so far and I have read almost 2400 chapters