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The story is amazing. But Webnovel drops all good novels as usual. Reader’s choice is a joke when only trash with the lowest votes gets chosen.
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iam a stard. Yah masih segar, jadi saya akan mengatakan, apa selanjutnya, Anda memiliki suara dan kesempatan untuk menjadi besar. Saya berpikir tentang hal yang sama sebelumnya dan saya ingin melayani Joe yang memainkan información tour mind Semoga berhasil dan kecepatan dewa.
I really loved this! It's so rare to find high-quality writing on WebNovel, and I devoured all 7 chapters. I love Eli so much; her personality is charming and endearing, and the story is surprisingly dark, which surprised me. There's some world-building happening at a nice measured pace, with an emphasis on character relations. Some of the writing in the last few chapters feels a little rushed compared to the brilliance of the first few chapters, but the author definitely has the capacity to produce a really high-quality story. Looking forward to see where the series goes! (Shipping Eli and Lara)
great story . great work great author. but you should fix some grammar issues. take a little bit of time . and reread the chapters you are making so that the grammar would be perfect. but overall the novel is great. keep up the good work ,
bro did u dropped it ?if not can u pls post some new chapters .
TL;DR The story overall is good, but you will die of frustration while reading. I will keep updating the review as and when I read more chapters.The story and progression is itself good. But if the story part is 50%, you will have 50% frustration with all the relationships of MC, his sheer dumbness etc. I probably will revisit or something later, but for now I'm pausing it for a while. For anyone who is busy in their own life or has another novel they are reading, I don't suggest this unless you are okay with above. If you only have subpar novels, this is much better as story wise it's actually a solid book in the way author connects different mythologies to magic and outer world etc. But I didn't see anyone like MC till the chapter I am in the comments. Author keeps saying it's a slow progression but even after 600 chapters, he still doesn't think for himself, has no spine, super frustrating character.MC is not smart or talented in ANY way. He is just lucky because he gets a few encounters without cause because there were many others with much better talents.
I need to take a moment to appreciate how distinct every character's voice is in this text because it's genuinely impressive. Liu Changyun alone could carry a comedy spin-off. The parrot tongue-clipping bit? 'You need to cut off part of your tongue. Your pronunciation will become perfect.' And then Zhou Yuwei turning it right back on him—'If I really cut off part of my tongue... Whether I'd still be able to speak at all would be another matter.' The banter between these two is so sharp and natural it reads like real people who've known each other forever. Zhou Yuwei's dialogue has this dry, confident quality that fits her perfectly. When she says 'Empty talk meant nothing. Whether someone was a donkey or a horse, they'd know once it was put to the test'—that's not just dialogue, that's a philosophy wrapped in a folk saying. And her interaction with Wu Xianjin at the factory, where she smoothly pivots from 'I'm a relative of your Director Big Belly' to handing him cigarettes without missing a beat—that's a character who knows how to read a room. Even the minor characters have voice. Auntie Cao's deliberate loudness so her son can hear her gossip about Zhou Yuwei skipping school—'that girl has never been serious about getting into college'—you can hear her voice, you can see her standing at the window with that knowing smirk. The author doesn't waste a single line of dialogue. Everything reveals character or advances the plot. I wish more writers understood this.
when are you going to update... update more
ER to be cont
Wonderful story ......