Overall its great but your character's lines are too long. Everything else is great. Like conversations are way too long and simetimes you don't even know who's talking.
Love the webnovel, Amazing work, currently there's about 500 Ch for this novel which is not on here, but 5 stars from me for this novel, and this is some filler text just to meet review standards cause I don't want to give any spoilers, just go ahead and read it!!
now this is a fresh novel combine two of the best genres beast taming and one where mc is a side character and the most interesting point in this novel is the cheat of mc doesn't help him enhance his beasts in anyway like in most beast taming novels
I dont care who's site this is on as long as the translators get proper credit. The translators go through the trouble of giving us this to read. MC is kinda slow to worldly affairs, wish he was more like Wang Lin from RI.
Im screaming‼️ I love this so much! Im a reader of all genres and this is my first time reading a story like this and I seriously can not express how much i have fallen in love with this just from reading 4 chapters! Im overly excited right im so sorry ?Keep updating ?
☝️☝️☝️????Do follow Author at @GomiSakka on twitter for advance glimpse of new chapters and to motivate author senpai?????Volume 2 also coming soon do look forward to it like me
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overall a good book slow on the character development. Nice story line between main character and pets, a little humorous but overall a good book,.
The story itself may be decent, but I can't tell, because the translation is absolute garbage. Definitely MTL tier.I also don't understand why so many authors feel the need to make the world of Pokémon edgy.
This isnt the worst book in the world, but its incredibly difficult to read if youre a native english speaker or if you have reached that level of speech, if the grammar and writing is improved i might give it another shot, but right now it is not good enough to keep me reading
I absolutely recommend this to everyone who wants something new to read and it got 800+ chapters ongoing in raw so we're not gonna run out of chapters to read anytime soon . Honestly i really hope it goes over 2000+ chapters before it ends . ありがとう ございます ?????????? !!!View More
Author, I'm going to be totally honest in this review (Until Chapter 30). About the story: It's interesting. The classic back in time with valuable information, added to the VR theme. How did the protagonist go back in time? I have no idea. There wasn't any hint that he had a title, item, or anything like that that made it possible. I don't know if there will be an explanation in the future. There is little (almost no information) about the events of the world and how everything got to the point where humanity is. All I know is what's in the synopsis. There was no detailed explanation while reading. For me this hinders the immersion in the work. The VR world is very interesting, seemingly gigantic, with the potential to be really captivating when more elements are inserted into the story. Apparently Jake won't be a nice protagonist who will forgive people who want to make his life difficult. I believe he will be ruthless with enemies and I believe he will take good care of those he cares about. Now I'm going to talk about the problems... I'm going to start by talking about the problem that has irritated me the most so far. 1st Character details: The author has a big problem in this area. When I read I feel that all people are walking mannequins. I don't know what the protagonist family looks like! This is serious. When an attendant appears "A pretty attendant". When Jake meets the Queen, the most beautiful woman in the kingdom, "Jake turned to see a perfect woman". When he meets Myriad Arrow, a important character "Tall over six feet, but with a slender and athletic build"... Bro, the eyes, the skin, the face... I want details. What color is the hair? Is it long or short hair? Straight or curly hair? Details! At least for the important characters in the story. Wait... What does the protagonist look like?! 2nd short chapters: That's my opinion. I believe the chapters need to be between 25~50% longer. Reading ends very quickly. It will also be good to enrich the story with details, interactions and thoughts from the protagonist and secondary characters when necessary.3rd Depth of the protagonist's relationship with important people: I found the mc's interaction with his family very shallow. I don't know what they're thinking, what they're feeling, what they like and don't like, what they think of Jake, what Jake thinks of them... I hope the mc's interactions with his family improve and that Jake can have a good relationship with future important characters.I hope you can consider this review and I hope it has helped you in some way to improve your story. Keep up the good work.