Shameless author review, I have really high ambitions for this novel and I hope you will follow along the twists and turns of the story! thanks
A very enjoyable multifaceted story. I was captured by all of the characters story's and how they were woven around each other and the world. I watched The Untamed first, but felt there was more, so here I am. I will continue to enjoy.
I never get tired of this novel, hope the author continue the good work..................................................................................
Very innovative piece of work. It’s marvelous, the creativity.
A good story decent characters but the translation is just god awful for an example one line is "A contracted beast can only have 5 contracted beasts"
Everything is good until the chapter 201 then the character becomes arrogant like any Chinese op novel the story becomes trash. Not worth it Dropped.
This story gives, I Was Caught up in a Hero Summoning, but That World Is at Peace, vibes. And by going by how enjoyable that story turned out to be and how this story is shaping up I am thoroughly exited. It's been a while since I found a genuinely enjoyable story. Keep up the good work! (ﾉ≧∀≦)ﾉ
Read the entire thing in one go, highly recommended! Surprised to see some exciting and good trial read after a while. World building is amazing in the 20 chapters I've read and MC is smart. Hope this gets picked cause I'm excited what this novel has to offer!
Great story, but author need to edit/make grammar edits as needed.
Netotare, that word should be enough for most readers to know why they shouldn't read this. I was interested in the novel at first, but it started showing signs of NTR, and then it just threw it all out onto us ( within first 50 chapters ). Quite disappointed
Please try and pay attention to the tense of the words you use, some of your sentences are incomplete or too short. As well as some words are misspelled, but overall still understandable and thankfully your pronouns are good.
When did and why does Shiyuki have a crystal heart? I thought Shiroe was the only one to have one, because it was an experiment from that 'woman' that their grandmother gave permission for her to experiment with Shido?
Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one!!!View More
I already love this story, I know that I will follow it! As expected from Killerbee! Please give it a read you won't regret it! It may be a bit early to leave al these 5 stars but I do it because I have great hope for this story and for me it is already 5 stars!