Is this novel already done? or already dropped?
I love this! can I please get the link for the raw please? I have a Chinese friend and she's also interested in this story. she wants to translate it for us.
This novel is one of those where the MC gets a system not to power-up themselves but to run a business. I personally really like this kind of novels, so it's interesting to read.
So far there are only 4 chapters so I guess the shop would become more and more popular overtime.
A few suggestions I wanted to give based on my personal opinion (author you can ignore these if you want since they are just my opinions)
Do a bit more world building, there are certain things I was able to imagine on my own but also things that I couldn't create a mental image of. One such thing is the shop: there is a transformation but the reader doesn't get to know much about how it looks now compared to before. I'd recommend checking out Black Tech Internet Cafe or some other similar novels to get inspiration on how to describe the changes.
From the general writing perspective I'd suggest avoiding repetitive use of words such as realized and shabby, and look for some synonyms.
The plot is a bit fast but I don't mind that too much.
Overall it's a very nice novel. I hope Lin Fan's sister isn't crazy and the shop grows well. Keep working hard!
Brilliant way to start, love the character detailing ... Not read much yet,but...this book is off at a great start
sigh ... don't be fooled by the cover. the focus of the story is totally different. also, it is such a hard read. the story development is abrupt. dialogue feels out of place. sentences are sometimes so long that they stop making sense. author Skips some things which makes us understand what was he trying to say. he sometimes writes totally opposite things what he meant. which leaves us with scratch our head. wastes too much time in describing things which r not done properly. and I don't know what the heck is going on in most chapters. sigh....such a disappointment. I recommend author to write smaller sentences. and readers to read comments so they don't get much confused.
You like classic xanxia? You are a fan of immortal beings? You love martial arts? Take this book and start reading now. Everything about it is classic. Story development is good, character is good,world background is good.
It's generic trash, don't get why people defend it, i see a couple of bots in the reviews as well, pls don't translate any more of this type except if it is actually good
The amount of stupidity in this novel is just on another level. I can’t stop facepalming.
A surprisingly funny take on what can be considered a tired genre of webnovels, that being the "alternate world entertainment is lacking so I'll use my original world's ideas to get rich" trope.
Sure it's like a lot of other works, but the author has made it just funny enough to keep me reading through the 60 chapter trial read.
A highlight of the novel is the side characters, most of whom have no contact with the MC and are just living normal lives while becoming infatuated with the toys. Realistic depictions of kids and how they just so so so so NEED that new toy from the show, and then how to hide it from their parents, teachers, etc.
The comedic aspects don't drag down the story, and only pop up every couple of chapters, often in unexpected ways. Like a joke that was innocuously set up a few chapters before a single line pays it off.
I will say that the first ten chapters or so were written in a bit too much of an overview style that were a little off putting since it seemed distant and rushed, but after that it settled down and the pacing worked better.
Nice to see so many bots giving 5 star reviews. Clearly a copy of animal assasin novel. Webnovel needs to actually show decent novels. Will be a cliche novel anyway.
Extremelt inconsistent. Felt like two different novels. So yeah. People are thirsty so they’ll prob give this 5 stars for the dual cultivation
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