reviewing for the event fp keep up the good work
Only the format makes it unreadable but the story is gud. I have read 5 chapters if you can fix the format i will surely read all the chapters amd support you.??
The ocs are well written and likable. The story really fleshes out original Naruto characters that had barely any screen time (if you've read it, you know who I'm talking about). The mcs skillset is more unique than most uchiha ocs, and the plot changes from the original story done by the mc are hype. Although it takes a while to really get started, it's worth a read.
Gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
really nice book overall just keep upi the good work??
This definitely got potential. In terms of plot writing, it seems to be establishing itself quite nicely and am excited about the overall world building.Hope you execute it nicely.
bro the moment I read chapter 3, I knew I was hooked, I knew no matter what happens I will read this to the end and here I am waiting for new chapters. This novel is hella good ??. Try it you will never regret it.
good story want to read more but who is MC Kathleen or someone else i am confused. 3rd chapter was good i think this one is going to be a good read if the author stick around .
And suddenly the purple potion that after being mixed with the yellow potion turned into a dark black color.
"Sucker Father, I go."
Last time they had the 'talk' Izuku almost died of embarrassment. Even worse, his childhood crush and Katsuki's mother was there. Mitsuki was going on about 'stuff' and safety. Katsuki was sat there face still!
Zhang Liu analyzed that third one. 'This fat Zhou Lei hasn't shown up in my class yesterday or today. Maybe he has been trying to get thin since last week? And this is him now...'