Really fun and well written survival story.
The pacing is really good, chapters just fly by really fast. The writing is very detailed, you can get a good grasp of what is going on.
The overall is story is good, with the premise of a mc that has information on the situation and is using it to gain advantage in the battle being a very cool one.
The magic elements sorta feel like they're just there for the sake of being there though. I feel this could just have been a zombie story with a mc that has inside information and we wouldn't lose much.
Also wish we would get less narration and more dialogue at times cause the dialogue is really fun.
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it's a bit cliche but it grows on you, mooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Review at chapter 150
Story, while somewhat cliche, is still pretty good. OP protagonist for the most part for those that like that. Cool concept with the divine class and the demerits that come with it. He doesn't really encounter any ACTUAL danger so far. Feels very low stakes, even if consequences are stated to be high.
Characters are downright terrible. All women are written terribly and there's clear, underlying sexism throughout. "Women are mysterious creatures" BS. Not to mention how completely dysfunctional the MC's family is. I hope the author isn't projecting too much, cause if they are, I hope they're in a better life situation now. I can't really find one well written character. Also trys to talk about trauma through characters, but it isn't really handled well. My only positive aspect of character design is the MC's clear divide between good and evil. Although I don't typically like 'soft' MCs, Cera's kindness in different scenarios makes total sense and is well executed.
Good updater.
World is nice for the most part. Cool that NPCs have their own version of world notifications. Issues arise in the total inconsistency of leveling as well as money. Both make little to no sense throughout.
It has an interesting premise with the mc being a deal with the devil type character. The cover art looks amazing as well. The only problem I had with it was the grammar making it a bit hard to read.
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
sounds quite interesting.. keeps you on the edge of your seats... i liked Bai ling character a lot.... like a lot..., mc is so potty mouthed that I'm in love...
Title: I Have An Impenetrable Fortress/我有一座无敌城
Rating: N/A
Status: 420(Ongoing)
Start Date: 2020/06
Author other work: History’s Strongest Senior Brother, History’s Number 1 Founder, I’ve Possessed the Demon Sovereign’s Body.
Very good writing. I love the plot so far and I love the characters. An extremely good read so far. 5/5 from me. Definitely worth a read. Love it.
This is the best book I have ever read so far
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Liking it a lot so far, keep up the good job................................................................................................
if only I could vote, then i would.
This book is really interesting and i find myself laughing at the mc personality. The world building could use some work but overall it is a really nice book.
PLS DONT DROP