Amelia_Gladhis
I advise you to read this story once later you'll keep coming to read next chapter .author put details in a good way and story plot is also interesting .
If you look through the reviews you will see that all the hate comments are from people who have read less than 60 chapters. While people who have atleast read 100 chapters or more (like me), praise this novel, and its creative author. The story may seem like the it doesn't go the conventional way at first, like the choices the Mc make. You may even feel like dropping this novel. But trust me and keep moving forward, once u get to atleast chapter 60, u will realise this is a diamond hidden in coal. Infact i reccomend all readers give a try(force yourself to read it even if u cant deal with the seemingly dumb choice MC seems to make) to uptill chapter 62, then i bet u will keep with this novel. About this novels MC, he choices may seem stupid and illogical to people, especially wat he does in chapter 45(note: many of you will even feel like to drop this novel at this chapter, but please hold u will together and march forth), but later on you will see why his decisions will benefit him. Also its not that the author is accidentally making the mc stupid, but the author is trying to portray that he is genuinely ignorant in this story, and he is improving by learning from his mistakes. This is what is meant by character development. If you are here to see a kumo desu ga, nani ka MC in this novel that instantly knows what skills to pick,or where watever legendary skills she picks becomes immensely useful, or have a diety watching wat the MC is doing while talking/informing her, then this is not tat kind of novel. Sure this novel shows a MC similar to kumo desu ga, but the only advantage that the MC has is his human inteligence. But that just gives him a headstart (Spoiler: As its strongly implied that monsters in lower levels will have higher inteligence and thinking capability) and lets him choose how to evolve/mutate. Other than that he is no other advantage, no info about the world from a God, no understanding of how dangerous situation he is or anything.This is a novel where it clearly shows the intensity of survival. The MC sometimes have to pick the short term benefits just to survive bit longer than the long term benefits. But after each of his trials and tribulation he find ways to turn his short term benefits to a long term advantage. That is the best thing of this novel.
so Basically MC is servant of rich lady.The master can basically kill her servant with a thought.I'm not reading this?. ....................
the story is ok but the story development is a bit slow and bore. the MC is kind of dumb and some part fell bore. The world background is kind of large and it can be a bit confusing
Has this romance, harem or any love interest? Cuz so far (Chapter 34) I have seen many hints to a future harem, but there are no tags containing it.
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Very good! Anyone wondering if they should read it, you definitely should! Haven't read all of it yet, but thumbs up for this one. And I have to say beautiful front cover. Great work.
One word: AMAZING.The imagery was so compeling. The way you wrote your prologue makes a reader want to carry on reading. It is truly captivating. I love that this is a dark isekai because most of the Insekai I come across are light so this was quite interesting to read. Of course, I only read a few of the chapters since there's is so many. I also love Ren's character. He is a NEET who has to now live the oppostie way of how he lived beforesince he is out in the open with many life threatening encounters. I loved that he had to work hard to become stronger and that it was not easy. That made the story more realistic and not rushed. Overall, great job.P.S. I've added this story to my library.
Translation quality honestly just kills this story for me, it keeps changing terms like the realm of mages int the story from chapter to chapter and is not consitent at all. The story is nothing special, op mc who hides his strength, because he is not strong enough yet to show it and needs to reach the peak first.
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I think writer should elaborated on things, make details and re-read what your write and adding some word that make reader interesting in them. Theres so many cultivation story out there, compare your writing, to me, your writing is just 2.5 but your story, OMG! I give full mark for them coz I juz got hook by the background story.... well done for that. This is not criticism but a constructive comment based on what I read. Sorry if u hurt and thank U for this story! Keep on it! Good work! U juz need Xperience, so just write. Cheers!!
I really like this book. The characters are fleshed out and the world building has gene steadily implemented. The elders of the sect are actually caring and not scheming old farts. It feels like a family instead of the usual.
