Good progress. Continue to post new chapters!
I like your dialogue style. Im a bit jealous of how easy it is to read your work, but yeah. Hopefully it just keeps getting better.
amazing one. when will the following chapters be posted?[img=recommend] excellent visualization. few writing errors. an overall perfect expression of the war scene.
Very funny and ass kicking especially when those old idiots when the trap that set for him turn back against them and can believe that they got play by a little kid
Interesting & hilarious story that won't disappoint u. In fact, read it! I hope they're not going end the story short disappointly...
This book is amazing..... there are mistakes but I understand......very interesting....I love Lilith and Raven tho but still Angelica and Lucifer.
Good book....keep it up
Overview TL;DR : A mediocre story with bad characterization
You know how you're reading a story and you like the elements in it like intrigue, super powers, progression, unique world, etc.... But there's something that's just off... about the story?
You, like I were probably missing proper character design and development. And none suffer more than the Main Character himself Quinn.
After reading 276 chapters, all I can say about his personality is has a "strong spirit" and that's only because the author specifically said so. What's even more interesting is while being a orphan and bullied for probably his entire life, he has no social defects.
Any other author who written a orphan character would build them up to have specific attributes like: incredibly isolated, irritable, vengeful, resourceful, or cunning due to circumstances. MC himself has circumstances that could characterize him (elaborating would enter spoiler territory for the first chapters) but the author doesn't uses it to define him.
Even other characters have more defined characterization than him. One of them acts in a flippant manner, another has a passion for a certain subject. Man, even a character I hated has his own interests. As for MC, you couldn't even tell me if he likes anything specifically.
Really it's all about characters. The author is bad at characterization, like describing the way he uniquely acts or behaves, or adding character defining moments that demonstrates the type of person they are. This is what ruins a novel, making the readers not care about the characters.
A better reviewer might focus on the other problems of the novel (e.g. bad antagonists) but what I wanted to focus on was this as it's something that if not improved, the author will only produce half-baked stories.
To be honest I wasn't supposed to read this because of the lack of chapters and the title, here I thought it would be like those Xianxia sh*ts but then I accidentally tapped this novel by accident since I'm using a mobile, thus since I was bored and nothing to read then I continued reading this...at first this novel Entrance was serious.
almost the same as Overlord (Anime) but there are just similarities but when I continued to read till Chapter 3 I got hooked this kind of novel is a gem!
glad I accidentally tapped this novel or else it would be left unread in my Library since I've already booked marked it even without reading it.
An interesting book for sure it’s has game mechanics like many books on this site, but unlike others it has interesting characters that bring vibrancy ,and color to the book. it is an excellent read for anyone who loves fantasy worlds. I hope it continues with he same quality.
dont know if i can still get that free 5xp i hope i do here is a shameless review im here to read the novel so i hope it really is worth the 5 star im giving
This is my initial review to show my support for the author until the story is completed. Keep up the great work, and may you see the rightful end with a renewed soul and purpose in life. You rock!
I'm hoping you could also help me with my beloved work, WAR GROUNDS (all caps please. The original version got bugged) by dropping an initial review. Cheers!
This novel is eppy sauce. But in all seriousness, it has a good plot development and begins with a character with lots of drive. Hopefully this evolves into a even more wonderful story.