Ahri_Gumiho
One Word- System
Two Words- Character Development
Three Words- Strongest Offline System
Four Words- Hardwork, Determination, and Passion
Five Words- Fight against the entire world
I was the previous translator for this novel, and it's a great read to those of you guys who like OP mcs and the Litrpg genre in general.
Translation quality:
3/5. Subpar, but definitely decent. Although there are many things I disagree on such as the various character names as well as the arbitrary switch from 'free points' to 'omni points', the translator doesn't fall short of other Qidian translators. I rewrote some entire parts to intensify the story as well as fight scenes to make the story better on my own discretion, but if the translator doesn't want to it's his decision. The editing is horrible though, if there's one thing Qidian needs it's better editors. Multiple typos, spelling mistakes and one out of every two sentences was badly phrased. Translation would've been 3.5/5 if it weren't for editor. So tempted to join Qidian as an editor.
Stability of Updates:
5/5, since it's Qidian. I mean, duh.
Story Development:
5/5. One of the best Litrpg/Magic novels, and the plot certainly isn't cliche.
Character Design:
Uh this is a CN novel so you obviously don't have character development. But the personalities of the various characters do remain consistent so a solid 3/5.
World Background:
4/5. It does well on world-building too though it doesn't focus on that aspect. This novel has a good author.
I'm following up and from what I've seen so far, it's a very generic theme with the same things that every cliche novel has ... When we say cliché it's not in the bad sense, it's simply that something new is missing, something that sets a novel apart from other. I think I've had enough of all these novels to tell the truth.
Sigh...
A very fun and interesting take on the usual "Lord Game" format that many chinese webnovels use, for once the MC is not rash, racist or stupidly overpowered and not everything goes according to plan, forcing the MC to adapt and overcome the obstacles with creative solutions rather than just luckily finnding a skill or item that would just perfectly solve his problems. My only complaint would be the intelligence level of all the young masters in this novel so far, it makes me doubt they are capable of tying shoelaces without help.
A good storyline Can't wait to see how LSR develops. The book is filled with so much thrills and cliffhangers. Please more updates I'm already hooked
It is a good story but for whatever reason it has stopped getting new postings. B b
Love this novel. Good story with a unique plot. It adds a twist to the apocalypse genre of novels. The characters aren’t boring to read and that’s all. Now enjoy my poem.
Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
Clovers are green.
White clouds are—white.
And the sun—it’s beautiful. Oh I messed up.
And the sun—it’s yellow. Orange. Red. What color is the sun?
FUUUUCCCCCKKKK
is this dropped ?? (・–・;)ゞ please update more.
it's a year old with 50 chapters tf?
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Love the book but the chapters are way to expensive!!!! 26 coins or 3 fast passes is way to much so if you could make it cheaper I would love to read more!!!
I've never read this genre of novel but you made it easy for someone like me to understand. I hope this story develops greatly. Good one
