Ahri_Gumiho
Seems like this is really good,hope you can keep going till the end ?
The novel is really great, the mc is very overpowered which I like very much. But the problem is that the mc drags things out for too long sometimes for no reason and sometimes makes excuses that he just wants to stay clean. Overall the novel is really good if you don't mind some minor stupidness.
Author here. The story is about a man who reincarnated as a special lion in a strange world filled with beasts. Prides and fight for the king title would show up, laced with kingdombuildingYES, IT IS WHAT YOU THINK. Give the story a read ?
i like the mc, though am more interested in Chloe. I like almost everything about the novel, well except the fact that he hasnt had any p**sy, lol
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Hello author here! If u like the novel do rate it and comment below for any suggestions Thanks for reading.
I really enjoyed reading this novel! The unique characters and interesting plot kept me hooked from the start. The pacing is fast and the story has great potential for growth. I can't wait to see how the author continues to develop the plot and explore the characters further
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I feel like the side character is more of the main character 777
in chapter 116 the mc says that he doesn't want to interfere with other people's affairs' but literally buys a slave and frees it because he feels bad, but when an entire tribe of "people" is in danger he says that he doesn't "WAnT To InTerFER iN OtHeR PeOplES AffAirs". There is so much inconsistency's with this novel. After chapter 70 he always blames his system for every little thing that doesn't goes his way, and it's like reading a spoiled brat that is op, and is expecting everything to fall into place
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This is a sci-fi/action series where characters have the opportunity to evolve using special serums and mutate with traits of other animal creatures for combat. Society is largely ruled by gangs, and not just anyone can live just anywhere.The main character himself is a gangster, but this isn’t explored fully. Although he has a family, there has been little world building or time spent with his family members or at his home, so he comes across as a rather shallow character. The other characters suffer from lack of depth as well, and they are quite forgettable. My Vampire System has a similar problem with character depth and making readers feel emotionally attached to and sympathetic toward the characters of the series, but it’s even worse here.The character designs are overall quite weak and forgettable.The story development largely makes sense so far, although not too much has happened yet. Some of the characters don’t make the most logical choices, especially the main character, but neither do real people. Even when there are some clearly important and critical things for the main character to explore, such as experimenting with his physique or testing out his abilities, he ignores these things altogether. He doesn’t make the wisest choices, and some of the planning in the plot is odd but may make sense later on.The world background is in desperate need of being filled up and shown, not told. Although some details have been explained to the readers, little has been shown to them to let them experience this world through the senses of the main character or other characters. This series could improve in quality dramatically by fleshing out the world and characters themselves.Although this is a series about werewolves, it’s clear by this point that the author didn’t do any research on wolves themselves due to obvious errors in describing wolves’ behaviors. If you’re here because you like wolves, then you will be disappointed. If you are here for werewolves and not the animal they’re based on, then you may still enjoy the series. If you are here for wolves and want to learn more about wolves by reading this series, then you should make a hasty retreat.Overall, some people may still like this series, but I don’t like it’s worth spending spirit stones or fast passes on with its current level of writing. That said, the writer could dramatically improve the quality of his series by trying to build the world and characters more.
