no world building, no proper translation, no character development, the whole story is just for the mc plot Armor, even more messed up thing is all these 1100 chapters happened in just 30 novel days and mc even became god in less than 30 days
The story made me read it fast because it keeps on adding my curiosity. So I didn't bother looking for grammar and spelling errors.
Stability of updates: excellent. 5 CH now in a period of 5-6 days?
Story development: the MC just started to develop his abilities, couldn't say more since it's only starting.
Character design: like what some people on the comment said, mc is somehow like deku. A bullied kid>got powers>his bully came with him on the academy>they will become enemies.
Fun Prediction: they're going to be friends in the future?
funny how the Moment it Turns Premium the Story gets worse and dragged. Also its way to early for the Premium Chaps.
If you dont Like mind control used on harem Girls dont read.
Writing Quality ★★★
•Many things are translater or was written wrongly or not aligning to what it should be, some are also connected with each other without spacing ex: Iwillkill your...
Story Development ★★★★
•It's a solid 4 for me because of its superb story pacing, 2 scenes are kinda forced but it's still good.
Character Design★★★★★
• The way the author gave life to every character and how he/she can make the audience understand how they feel is already chef kissed. Although in the original world there's still some ladder being climbed for the MC to mature it still show its good potential.
Updating stability★★★★★
• Might change it later....
World Background ★★★★★
• Since MC is being put to different world or should I say 'virtual world' it gives the story different vibes and different backgrounds but since it's still on the trial and onky released 20 chapters it has potential.
This is one of the great trial novel I've read here on this site couldn't believe they actually put something new or kinda 'new' which is pretty much better than the other "novel" which is basically a copied version of a copied version of the original novel.
I'll give this one a solid 4.4 and I gladly recommend this...
You got my vote....
I hope people would start writing a proper review or synopsis. Just to give the idea to new readers on what the story is. Most of the comments here barely reviewed about anything important.
Okay... I know I contradicted myself by writing this, but I just had to point it out.
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Bit late to the party for this. A bizarrely light hearted novel for those with good taste. I wasn't expecting something this enjoyable going into this but I must say I'm pleasantly surprised.
This is a borderline gag novel so there isn't a need to go too deep into the novels details but it is a fun, semi serious novel with a fairly likeable protagonist. Standard but sensible worldbuilding, characters and power systems. There're only 19 chapters right now so all I can say about the story is that it's not bad so far.
For once, there are no signs of any bullies, jealous 3rd rate antagonists, young masters, "school belles" and other tiresome tropes in sight. That alone is a huge plus personally. Most side characters are actually a little bit likeable. 4/5
A good cross over story, a bit on the slow side, but good. The MC (so far up to chapter 72) is as of yet not the cliche OP cultivator, although it is slowly building up to that. He is still actually very weak. His skills as a botanist have definitely helped him, but not overly so. He is slowly building his expertise in that field as well. Perhaps the most annoying thing is he is only gaining enemies and not getting rid of them. There is glaring plot armor, but it is not too bad. Overall, I enjoy this novel. I like the MC, even if other characters are soon forgotten or ignored. He may be somewhat mild mannered and not very exciting, but he is still a decent character.
I have read ahead through raws. My views:
1. A good novel. You will know what to expect if you have read Er Gen's previous novels: comedy and world building. No standard arrogant young masters.
2. The title of novel is different in Chinese. I'm guessing translator took heavy liberties as the title is very hard to translate. Also, the chinese synopsis is a poem like structure. It explains about the title of novel. So disappointed that translator skipped it.
3. The MC is a fatty who wishes to become the top dog so that he won't be bullied. After all, the top dog gets the right to bully others.
4. There is really no technology much less sci-fi tech. Pretty much standard xianxia setting except we are on Earth.
5. The humor is really good. The starting jokes are on MC trying to lose weight.
The translation seems to have stopped after chapter 40. Rest of the chapters seem to be machine translated. But I still red over 100 chapters and it was pretty good except a few simulations in the novel seem to be inconsistent even after the explanation provided. For one such, wherein he is pursued by Rong corporation, there was no explanation. I don't want to give a spoiler so I won't go into details