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"Hey [Failed genius], HUGE congratulations on publishing your first book! I'm beyond thrilled for you!Your hard work and dedication have finally paid off, and I couldn't be more proud of you! Your book is going to inspire and captivate so many readers.Now, I have a special request for you... In your next book (because I know there will be many more!), can you please add a character named after me? It would be an absolute honor!Once again, congratulations on this incredible achievement! Can't wait to read your book and celebrate with you!"
its was awesome.will come back to read another chapter ?keep doing the good work
I have read up to chapter 150.+ English is ok for a non-native like me. Can't really talk about quality though.+ Story is frequently updated.Now for the interesting part of the reveiw :- The background is unclear. Many things should be introduced early on but aren't. Some key components of the story just pop in place when author need them. (the relationship between MC and Female lead, for example). It gets a bit better after the story unravel a bit, but still unclear most of the time.+ Character are fun, some are quirky. Sometimes it feels forced but that's ok. Main characters are lovable, the banter is nice, and relationships dynamics are clear and well explained.+/- Story developpement is cut into two part : in the game and out of the game. It feels like two different stories for now. There is potential I think, but it feels weird at times.I was hooked around chapter thirty I think ? But paywall at 150 chapters.= Could be a fun read if you are looking for something to keep you busy between two books.
I've just started reading this amazing novel and I'm already completely hooked! The story is so captivating and the characters are incredibly well-written. I can barely put it down!
Not what I was expecting, definitely worth the read. Well balanced between making me laugh and making me think. Relatable storyline with a slow build but good plot twists which has me waiting for the next chapters !
which chapter will he stop being fat ..............................................................................
This book is pretty good i like the characters so far and the story is decent. It is a bit all over the place but does seem interesting.The first few chapters are partially just walls of text and world background but it does explain the world a bit.The plot of this book is really interesting and has potential
Except for few character and story development flaws.. as a smut.. this novel is just tooooo good..
Wow! I'm really impressed ? your writing style is addictive and the plot is stunning ? I love the dynamics in your story 1000/10 bro ???
This book is literally a real rollercoaster of emotions and I am loving it. I'm strapping in!
This is an amazing read. If you're looking for a level headed FL then this is the right stop.
am addicted to this novel, the story is just that good
