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This is actually really interesting, i want to read more of it to know more about the story and characters. The first few chapters are really good, totally recommend for those who like these type of novels.
Late review but here's a 5 star, I think you fairly deserve it as the book didn't fail to entertain me as a reader, plus the writing is great there's really nothing I can complain the book is amazingly done.
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Personally I like the book. I mean ya, the MC can be op but that is the point so I see nothing wrong. But I know some people want characters to start off like ants and become gods.
It sounds good but I dislike simp MCs now, all because she's beautiful she gets so much wealth? Lol. Idk man. As long as it's executed well, it's all good but summary makes me doubt that.
This author has a natural talent in producing garbage. All of their books have weak premises, but even fall short on doing said weak premises justice.
just a reminder. people who make undertale fanfics often drop because they feel "trapped" in the undertale universe, just remember there nothing preventing you from having a side chapter where the mc goes to a different multiverse. this way you can have an easyer time trying to find ideas and getting unmotivated due to lack of uploads. have a fine day bro.
We know next to nothing about the Character and World Background.
The translation is decent but this novel has the usual "young master" syndrome problem.
Every 1-2 chapter has the usual spectator that needs to say negative comments about the main character just for him to "shine brighter" and the usual face slapping that always appears.
I think this novel looks great so far. It let's you know that there is going to be a great story to discover and I can't wait to see more chapters release. The premise of the story is intriguing and I want to see how it unfolds. The only issue is that there are slight grammar mistakes but those can easily be fixed with time, and you can still understand what the author is trying to say. I look forward to more of this book and I hope it'll be more interesting as it develops.
Great premise, with interesting characters. There are only a few chapters so can't give an accurate review. But reading the first 30 chapters, the plot looks promise. The romance is subtle and the pace is slow at first. The grammar could be improved, hopefully, the author updates more frequently. The power system is also very interesting, looking forward to how it unfolds. Maybe I will come back later and binge.
It's really cool, you have a fertile imagination, I feel like I'm watching a movie in the cinema. I really like that you made Rocky remember his life. I feel warm when he talks about his mother and sister