I’m looking forward to a lot from you Carl Roy
Dear Author,Will our MC, Hierd, ever summon a "person," or has he not thought of that yet? But either way, this is a really good story, and I look forward to more of its development. Thank you for creating this story.
5 for the synopsis and after reading a few reviews where the author solves the reader's misunderstanding and above all, exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;exp;
It is interesting to read. You will fall at the first even without realize. Keep support this author guys.
I can only say that the MC is absolute trash. Hope the yakuza can cripple him so that the sister can become the real MC, either way this is not even worth starting.
Love this book very much?? The writing and the blurb is Catchyyy and captivating, Keep writing and dreaming author i will always support you and bring more wonderful stories like this. Kudos!!!???
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The worldbuilding caught my eye, really, it is very dark and fantastic, it is not too whimsical for a novel with such deep themes, and the writing style of the author is greatly enjoyable. It is very luscious without being overly descriptive, I do not have much to complain about here.
Very good.
Story is undoubtedly good, but i guess there was too much simping for me.Mystery and action parts were decent but romance was weird in that situation, it feels like author forced mc to simp after girls
What I love about this novel is the interaction between MC and Heaven, unlike other fantasy novels were MC is trying to kill Heaven for reason unknown
Writing quality is amazing and though he will never correct anything he generally won't have to.Story Development is okay. Certain things I question (Ashly being one of them.) While others are quite well done (Emma and sky.)Character design. Lemme just say. Ashly makes me want to have her grow some balls so I can put them under a hydraulic press. Everyone else is well done. Although mc can feel a little bland sometimes. The actual designs are cool such as water hair in the newer chps.Updates come pretty fast. This might be my last post here if I can't keep up.World is still in need of building. But it feels a little bland and mundane. Nothing super new here.Overall a good novel. World building is a bit weak but the characters are compelling. **** Ashly though.