DeathWalker
Aha, i wasnt the only one to see xD best ppl
As the story progresses, it becomes increasingly monotonous and frustrating due to plot inconsistencies. Every minor action of the protagonist garners excessive admiration from both characters and readers, which feels unrealistic and unfair. The constant reliance on luck rather than hard work grates on my nerves. And the portrayal of female characters fawning over the main character is another turn-off. Initially, I had hoped for a more complex narrative with misunderstandings à la "The Confused Fairy," but alas, it appears to be just another generic self-insert power fantasy. I've had enough; I'm done with this novel. It's clearly a disappointment.
Fellow challengers its been more than a month since the last time i made the last comment but reading this was so mentally taxing that i couldnt read more than few dozen chapters a day and even then most of them i just fast read bcs of the amount of useless information... im curently at around 1160 chapters and i have a good news if you remain strong and still read. After chapter 1000 chapters lenght got cut by HALF, yes you read that right but the downside is that they copypaste most of previous chapter and just paste it in the new so you need to read from half of new chapter to actually progress with the story which is... family matters that no one cares abt> update screen > face slap> update screen> familly matters> sm*t > world progression> we met new enemies aaand repeat, mind you that all side characters remain strong and just as i thought "finally she made a big jump in power maybe she will leave them now and move on!" they go brrr and get to her level and the new ones keep co..
i seriously hate haram novels
Even though Remi didn’t like his new body, judging from the way that Emelia was continually eyeing him and the little stars in her eyes, Peppa the pig was a real ladykiller! ( ⚆ _ ⚆ )
I'm stopping at chapter 393. On top of the reason I mentioned below, the book isn't really worth reading- Even though they're called Lord's, there's no single time the MC has actually managed his territory. All he does is recruit more succubi and tell them to hunt to level up. That's it.- Around the chapter I stopped, MC went and defeated some Lord's, then went somewhere else to hunt for treasure and just when he got back to his territory, someone's already asking for his help and he rushes out again. It happens again and again and again. MC is either attacking other Lord's, being attacked or searching a treasure spot. Nothing else. He just got married to 2 elves mind you, and he didn't even spend 1 day with them before he rushed out again like it's his job to save every fcking person. - Apparently MC was only mentioned to have transmigrated once in chapter 1, after that nothing else. We see his sister and no mention of parents. He belongs to dragon country(fcking ingenious name?) but no city name. He had a friend in chapter 1 that's not seen again. All the above just shows how 1-dimensional this book is.- He doesn't keep any secrets. Like literally. So if he gets information on how to become stronger, he shares it to his alliance of a group of people he met only like 2 months?? Maybe it's just cus I like cautious and smart thinking MCs that this aspect really bothered me.- The last and most annoying one; he wants to get strong and powerful, but still hides behind his succubi army like a fcking coward during every (EVERY) fcking fight! This book is a joke and will only waste your time. Do not read it and spare yourself the agony of reading this. I really regret reading this book.
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Aow...aiya..m crying..but y isn't she vit their father rather than Ji Buwang..Aow..I kind of want the father n n their family to b together vit Mu Jingzhe
the world building is ok, we haven't explored much for now and I don't find anything really problematic, it updates regularly so there's that. characters for now aren't that good other then the mc who feels slightly better, the plot is quite intriguing as the premise is repeated reincarnation in the same world, no flaw for now. but the quality of writing is not good, randomly the gender change from he to she, the name of the martial arts change from one to another etc etc, it feels like a bad translation, in dire need of editing.
Same, this is basically to milk the novel or something. It is so terrible.
to much wow. how did you even get away with this lol.
Love this book!
