truthfully I got lost just within the first 12 or so chapters, nothing is explained and the events feel extremely jumbled and out of place, the grammar it self is good and I could see this improving but I feel the whole beginning would have to be re-written once again in order for the flow of the story to be back in order
Awesome novel ! Great action ! Maybe writing this review for the xp. Maybe not lol. Or maybe yes. Or maybe not. Or maybe yes. Or maybe not. Or maybe yes. 140 characters achieved haha ! But legit , it is worth the read from what I've seen.
interesting story, my kind of story, so I already love it. The author did a good job, keep it up, waiting for more chapters..................
petition to bring back the world of deities.........................................................................................................................
I would have expected this of a Japanese protagonist, never a Chinese protagonist.
Here we have a White-Knight (incarnation of all that is righteous and heroic in the world) MC, who will make stupid decisions, and instead of being punished for it - he will instead be rewarded by the dullard of an author. Not once, or twice, but throughout the entire novel.
Somethings shouldn't ever see the light of day. This novel is one of them.
5* for now will update later. Im very picky nowadays though so be prepared.
Writing is well paced and neat, which I appreciate very much as it makes it easy to the eye. I believe the story hasn't delved into its core yet and will be waiting for the upcoming chapters. The world is fascinating, however it would be even better if you described it in more detail. But one thing I want to say is do write at your own pace as you seem to be juggling two novels, and that is a very brave thing to do, if I say so myself XD Keep it up but don't forget to take breaks once a while!
This is one of the best books I have ever read. I could barely put it down and when I did I couldn't stop thinking about it, I even dreamt about it! Thank you❤
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What I love about this story is that, though slightly too wordy at times, the descriptions were proficient and they really made me travel to the world of the story. The emotions of the characters are depicted perfectly and, overall, I can't wait for this to continue. Excellent job!
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