Heavenly overlord the **** can't you have any ideas to write a novel this is kinda annoying and boring irritating the same topic is repeated three times at the start of novel vk NFL eyes of ra hmm ez hmm hmm ez hmm ez hmm DZ um Tzu um duct SK nd en bf an nd week later is all y'all X SK idk LFOs en el lf SK kHz too seek **** TX all X FL lf dj kg dj who JFK St in dnbdndksksbdjajksbdjidjvfhfjksjsjdjdjsjjejejgghhhhhuuu7hhhhhhuuujjujjjuujj jjjjjjjkiiiikkkkknbfddtghbbvgshsjsjjdjdhrjjdjdjeiskkskekekekekkdkdkekekdkkdkkejebrgtvkfkdhjrjrjthfjdjdjrjjfjfjdjjdjdjdjJjdjdkdkdkddkf
Honestly, the story is so contrived and boring. God damn, this is one of the hardest reads I've ever encountered. Where has the quality of novels gone. Beginning was just so generic; and I don't even dislike generic themes, as long as it's done right. This was not done right, and I'm speculating it never will. I'm not gonna fault the translator without knowing the source material, because as I said; it is hard to read. Seems to be stable updates, good work on 100 chapter initial release; dedication dude (Don't know if this was translated on other site, but ah well). Whatever, continue the project and see where it takes you. Maybe the novel undergoes some sorta genesis and goes god level.
i love the story and i hope its updates comes faster cuz I'm eager to read more ............................................................
I love what you did with the translations and correct grammar but you removed some chapters from the book and that's kind of unfair, now I have to go back to rereading the entire thing for missed chapters.
this is another typical chinese novel. the mc is op and leveling up faster where in he already has the ability to compete the older generation which is good in my perspective. BUT, the biggest downside most the Chinese author is that they can't utilize the power of imagination to create a fantasy, martial arts genre with an amazing and unique world background and settings without replicating the continent, and those superpower countries in our own planet earth just to justify their own china and make the other countries as villain and evil which is very cringe and hypocritical on their part.I REALLY HOPE TO ENJOY READING A NOVEL WITHOUT ANY NATIONALISM AND ONE-SIDED PERSPECTIVE WHERE IN THE AUTHOR SERVE AS A NEUTRAL NARRATOR JUST READING A WONDERFUL AND OUT OF THIS WORLD NOVEL.
TOTAL disappointment! Disappointment due to time spent reading. In chapter 3452, the author got tired of writing: MC quickly killed the BIGEST enemy of all novel and in the next (final) chapter together with 3 wives, returned to the first plane of existence (out of 33) and HEA. WTF?! A bunch of storylines are not closed. What kind of tree and how is it related to the MC? What kind of animal spirit does he cultivate? Asura - we never know where it came from and what to do with it. Do you still remember the MC from the modern Earth? Forget it! It does not affect the MC. Except how to divert lightning, his knowledge is no longer useful. Often the MC is not consistent in his actions and applied skills. Do you know that in each plane of existence there can be different worlds and why the author writes about it and how it helps MC, etc. Out of the 33 plane of existence MC only reached the 5th. After the 3rd read novel was already boring and the author no longer knew where to develop the story and MC. In general, the concept of the work and the MC is fresh and different from other works, it was interesting to read the first half. Only for this 4 stars.
Hah~ it is worth my time <3 apart from Roberto, I don't know other soccer player lmao, but thanks to this I receive a lot of knowledge about the past's competitions and stuff :3 (if we add other sports then that would be the tennis player Nadal, Federer and the atlthere Bolt) Welp, I spend 3 days just to finish this lol The MC (Wu Hu Young/Joshua Wu) was pretty op ... nupe! he's really op XD he only loses several times, I guess you can only count it in your hands lol. I was thankful this isn't a harem where many girls surrounding him and there's only a sole female candidate for him :3 even if their relationship suddenly went into that so fast lol xD He doesn't have that much interaction with his family, well except at the beginning of course, and in the epilogue, as it was literally focused on soccer, there is no drama going on so its goods
loving this story , i'm just eagerly waiting for the mc to start cultivating through *** , the stronger the girl he f u c k s the stronger he will become ! muhahahaha!
can I know how often do you update???
Looks Amazing looking forward to upcoming chapters
This novel is so f**king interesting. pls write more chapters and pls author, don't make Daphne accept those triplets again please. I want her second chance mate to be Andrew . I seem to like that guy and he acts and is very much perfect for daphne
addicted to read