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I really liked the idea of this novel and it saddens me that it is left unfinished like this i hope the author get back to this beautiful story
Good story, 40 chapters in then stopped. I hope the author/translator picks it back up. Story plot and boosts seem to be moving pretty fast though.
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I think This Novel one of my favorite, I Don't know about future chapter but from the chapter i read, This Novel At least teach us about Respect Other People Religion, So I hope New Chapter be release faster n Future Chapter Will be Better From Current Chapter
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Everyone! Check this story, I know that it's only starting but still you won't regret reading it!☺ Its a gem everyone A GEM! And author?~
Kinda boring. The plot is uninteresting, and his cheat isn't prominent enough to make up for that.
Lumydee where are you? I need more more more more morererere
I don't always write reviews, but when I do, it's either because the novel is really good, or really bad. Despite all the positive reviews, in my opinion, this belongs in the latter.
First of all, the positive. The world background is unique, and certainly above average. The relationship between characters is decent.
Now, the bad things.
The most important thing, the humor. While I did chuckled once in awhile, for the most part, it's just painful to read. The author tried too hard to force the comedy.
The parts where it should be serious, the author still tried to add humor. All the Elders and Sect Leader acts like a bunch of 12 yearsold.
There are certain situations where comedy comes from surprise or the suddenness of the situation. However, the way this novel is written completely take away the surprise part and ruin the humor.
Most importantly, I don't know if it's the translator or the author, but using vulgarities to force the humor is just immature. Conversations between characters are completely devoid of witticism. Characters swore and cursed at each other is just...tasteless. Once in a blue moon, it sort of worked, but the rest of the time, it's just overdone and became vulgar instead. Sometimes, the vulgarities even ruined the part where it's actually funny.
Let me give you an example, the MC were talking with a girl about how bad his Master was. The conversation were going just fine, then he dropped a sentence along the line "you might aswell tell me to masturbate over my Master getting gang raped"....
It's not like i'm over sensitive, but it's just tasteless.
That is just pure vulgarity, not comedy.
If you want an actual humorous xanxia, try A Will Eternal. This novel is just a really bland and vulgar slapstick comedy.
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Just another shameless author review:-
Yep, I'm giving my work 5 stars just because I created it and if you're reading this review, I'm assuming that you haven't yet made up your mind about whether or not you want to read this book or not, so let me help you.
You should definitely NOT read this book if you're NOT a fan of humor, because this book is gonna be funny.
I personally enjoy laughing and will try my best to make my readers laugh too.
If you DON'T like innovative novels with a unique world background and are looking for the same old things, then probably this novel is not for you either because there's nothing quite like it out there.
If you WANT to get your money's worth when you pay for privilege and expect the author to mentain a fair release rate, then yeah you're at the right place because I've completed two works in two years with a very high release rate.
And if you need even more convincing then let me just spam some words.
1) Space
2) Good book
3) Social Injustice
4) Face Slapping
5) Lip smacking
6) Beautiful Women
7) BEAUTIFUL WOMEN
Yeah that's it, you're sold. Come try the free chapters at least.
author kys.
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I've always been a fan of visceral violence/ horror mixed with fantasy elements and I feel that this novel delivers. I loved the grotesque details of the actions as well as the implications of the kind of the world this story takes place.
While the writing can be good, even phenomenal at points, it can use a bit of polish in sentence structuring. There is also some repetition but not a lot to really hinder the experience.
Overall, this is the kind of story that you want to read if you want to clean your palate from the usual fantasy story.
