This is a really good story but do you have a schedule on updates? I dont like reading ongoing stories too fast because you never know about updates
I like to book, beginning is amazing
The Introduction and early chapters had piqued my interest. What I can say is that this book has great potential. I like the pacing. The storyline is good as well. I recommend this to everyone especially those who love werewolf and romance stories.
Only a few chapters in, but already hooked. Well written and a real page turner!
this is one of my favorite books
I love this book. Keep updating regularly!! ...
Very good read
Beautifully written. I loved it so much ...️
Good story telling can’t wait for the next book
great read
It started off great but eventually turned into just another book filled with clichés typical of Chinese novels.
The fact that it was written before *Avengers: Endgame* also posed a significant issue. The author tried to force the *Endgame* storyline into their narrative, which only resulted in a chaotic mess.
The plot became a series of convenient twists, and what I initially thought were intentional plot holes set up to be resolved later turned out to be deeply disappointing. It seemed like the author stopped caring, resorting to more convenient twists to resolve issues in an unsatisfying manner or simply forgetting about them altogether.
The presence of Chinese novel clichés was also very prominent and problematic.
- Every time the main character travels through the galaxy, he ends up killing people and causing trouble for his weaker "allies." He shows no concern for the consequences of his actions and simply brushes them off.
- The story is riddled with uninspired fight scenes and dialogue that make you question whether you’re still reading a Marvel fanfic. What’s worse, there’s more fighting than actual story development. It’s a typical case of Chinese novel filler.
- Even the action scenes, which could have salvaged some interest, are just the usual fare found in Chinese novels.
It could have been more tolerable if the author had managed to write compelling action sequences, but it’s just the standard fare.
In response to the review, it seems the reader has a balanced perspective, detailing both the positive aspects and the areas they found lacking. Here's a rephrased version in English:
The reviewer appreciated the engaging climax and the unique concept of the mysterious character Su Bei sacrificing for the protagonist, which initially piqued their interest. The dynamic between the tease-like character and others was intriguing. Despite acknowledging the translator's efforts, the story faced some issues.
The main drawbacks mentioned were excessive spoilers, particularly in the later chapters, which might deter potential readers. The author's approach to developing certain plot points felt underdeveloped, like the student council's ambition, and the主角 Zhao Xiaoyu's growth停滞 after her initial boost.
The reviewer was disappointed with the lack of character development for Zhao Xiaoyu and Mu Tieren, feeling they deserved more interaction and growth arcs. The portrayal of the protagonist group's reactions in the "Weixi Holy Land" arc seemed out of character and inconsistent.
Additionally, the reviewer found the use of the "Destiny" intelligence organization as a plot device unsatisfactory, as it felt forced and not properly explored. The story could have benefited from a deeper background on Su Bei's past and the organization's founding.
Su Bei's character became repetitive, with predictable patterns, which detracted from the story's excitement. The sudden and bland death and resurrection left the reviewer unimpressed, especially considering the build-up.
Lastly, the ending was a letdown, with rushed and unsatisfactory resolution, plot holes, and dangling loose ends. The author's handling of Su Bei's character and the overall narrative felt disappointing.
While the reviewer loved the characters and original ideas, the numerous issues led them to lower their rating. They hoped future readers might enjoy the story more, despite their personal reservations.