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Hey, ever wonder what its like to see the MC be a fatty despairing for a girlfriend? Well you’ve come to the right book.This fatty realized his desires upon death and was gifted with a chance to go after them.No more shy guy, as this fatty uses the system given to work towards such a goal.From fat to flat, from starving artist to leonardo de vinci.Come watch this journey with an old man, for with the tasks this system gives will have you both rolling and thankful you are not him.Kudos on the translation to get across the great humor, and maintaining stable updates.The pace of the story isn’t the fastest, nor exactly slow either. Its just right to flesh out the accompanying characters alongside the MC.Perhaps the only tank in ratings would be world building as things are very centralized at this point in the story. Definitely a more modern setting comedy story based around slice of life, so no harsh critique from the world building perspective here.
If only the grammar were fixed re edit it please
Husband: Honey, I invited a friend home for dinner.Wife: What? Are you crazy? The house is a mess, all the dishes are dirty, and I can't cook meal.Husband: I know all that.Wife: Then why did you invite the friend?Husband: Because the poor fool is thinking about getting married.
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As a Pole, it's hard for me to read this novel ... the author knows too little about the history of his country, the characters are annoying and stupid ... and many other irritating things. If someone has a lot of time can read, if someone expects a good story better to look for another novel.
An uncliche plot there. I like how you separate the paragraphs. And you write so well. Good job! I expect more action scenes. Hehe nice one there, author!
Although it has few chapters it has a very promising plot and MC and is written by a good author1 which can be hard to find on this site full of the predictable "harem 20 chapters in
No Yandere Tag? Such a dissapointment, but i will read, coz u are a legend and i really love your writing in 'The Conqueror Path'.I hope i can see the end of you work
This is really amazing. I read the introductory chapters...and I'm stuck!
great story ...