Hope he wouldn't just get all those God-Tier skills from the start. Too OP makes those skills not precious and boring, because there won't be development for the skills. But, at least he's not Thomas, or Johnson, or Bick.
I wanted to like this one sooo much but it really revs up full throttle on the Chinese superiority. I don't even mind a little tuting of the Chinese horn I'm proud of my country to for the most part but it's super cringe when most of the story revolves around it.
Ok, I had previously posted a review but it got deleted by mistake,so I'll just post it again.
So,this story has a unique idea of a villian fighting against the heroes or the protagonist.Although it is not that unique since there are plenty of villian protagonist novels out there but a villian protagonist obviously recieves a lot of backlash since he is both a villian and a protagonist, it's like joining two sides of the coin together.even if the protagonist enemies dies in a fair fight that would still be considered a plot hole since the enemy doesn't behaves like a hero so it is really difficult to write a satisfying story with it,however this novel mc nails it.The story has a MC one can somewhat relate to,he is not stupid but not an All knowing God either.He can only operate within his own scope of knowledge.Coming from the future gives him an advantage but his opponents weren't nearly stupid enough to tell him all their past plan's details.So he has to struggle through it.He makes mistakes and is not perfect,he sometimes acts stupidly but also tries to learn from it.
Secondly,the characters are all given thought into.All characters whether it be the MC,his enemies, or mobs they all have their own motivations, stories and schemes laid out.In the early chapters,the web of schemes gives the feeling that the MC who is surrounded by the web of schemes and enemies he cannot get out of even with his background and that our Mc and his background is both useless.It quite honestly frustrates you so much that you start cursing the author and even consider dropping this but when the Mc succeeds you feel the joy multiplied by that much too,so it has it's ups and downs.
World building-I will not say much about this .Again world building Is given proper thought as well.Both the future from the Mc and even facts about history is well written and they are in one way or another relevant to the story or affects the story.
Update stability- The updates are frequent and regular,you normally wouldn't have to worry about when it is going to be updated,there are times when there are 4ch/day. it really speaks volumes of how hard the author works on it.But the number of updated chapters are really inconsistent it can be 1,2,3 or 4 chaps/day No one knows.It is 2chaps/day nowadays.I understand that author has his own life too but I am not really too happy about it, so a point minus for that.
Overall writing style - the writing style is fluid and it Is difficult to find out plot holes though that maybe because author does not provides any heads or tails of stuff.the reader have to do it themselves.Basically based on volume 1 the story unfolds in various stages, different elements and characters are introduced to make the story more intriguing and unpredictable.Until the author says it himself.I am positive no one can predict the flow of the story,though a lucky guess is still possible,until now at least.
Grammar- Let's just say this.I do not really care for grammar.As long as the basic grammar conditions like the comas,space between lines and words and the sentences make sense.I do not really care for thinks like the positioning of words and stuff.So my sense for perfect grammar might be different than others.Though in this story you probably not face such a problem.At least I did not so that's that.
Overall it's a great story with well written characters, thought out world building,frequent updates and a fluid writing styles.Ask for more and you simply want a beating.
I am not really a person to write a review for a novel but I am writing for this one in hopes that more people would see this and support this novel and perhaps the author would not drop this or mess this up.Its been a long time since I surfed through the internet and find a novel with such great potential.
great strart .. great flow.. no over description, plain fun and fast .. interesting power ... hope to see more ......................................
The idea is great, background information is lacking to say the least, chapters are chaotic and i though that chapters are missing in some places... Also i only got to chapter 40 so can you someone tell me if he ever comes back home and see his maid dead?
Trial Read Review (only from synopsis):
(IOHOSBICPAHTTP) - So this guy is in a world where this virtual game can merge with reality. He levels up one skill (the fireball, supposably) and it becomes super OP that it can literally blast a hole through the earth. Honestly, can’t see much potential in this one. It’s like any other virtual reality power and does not seem to have much diversity in its plot. This will have to go in my maybe read list.
(1MTDBIABT) - Guy gets doomsday system one month before doomsday. This sounds like an interesting plot with some potential (I hope). All I wish for is it to not be like on of those trashy apocalyptic novels.I will put this on my read list for now.
(MCCIE) - Guy dies then his conscience goes into an eyeball. It can evolve and whatnot and he gets OP. If I’m being honest about this novel, I’m not feeling good vibes. It sounds like one of those grindy novels with no actual plot. Oh well, I will check it out.
(ICVCA) - Guy transmigrates but can see the stats of other humans. Whoopee do. What a fun plot (that definitely has not been used many times before). I honestly am sick of these types of novels. But who knows? Maybe this one will be good (not placing my bets on it).
(OG:IAAPP) - This plot is basically like the first one excet that he gets the privileged player system which allows him to get more EXP and more things in general. I honestly can not get why so many writers follow this plot. It has been overused too many times. I will maybe read this one (if I get super bored).
(EHFS) - Protag gets four skills. But so does everyone else. This is the synopsis. That’s all.
(CC:ITWMS) - If you have read my reviews before, you will know I like sect/clan/company or whatever building novels. This is one of those except that he has his smartphone which can do many things. Google maps makes him see the terrain, banking system lets him exchange currency, ect. This is one I will definitely read.
needed a story with this concept I can get behind it . . . . . . .
Good story. The main character a bit wishy washy. But I believe in character development. Hopefully he can become strong as soon as possible! Many typo. But its okay!!
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Hello author.. when will you release the other chapters. we're looking forward to it and I'm so eager to read it? and please make it perfect smarter, powerful and stronger of our MC. Hope he is one of a kind and so loyal to his partner/lover, pls don't disappoint us. hehe thanks ?and i hope you can notice me senpai ?
Having written over 100k+ words, I can tell you that this novel is kinda slow paced. You might feel like things are happening randomly at that point.The pace does go up a bit after around 50 chapters but it's kinda slow before that. Anyways, have fun reading!