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boa história ...........................
Yes. The amount of young masters and random encounters that shouldn't happen in the novel makes it just too boring to read. At least the manhua makes it visually pleasing and I don't need to read 10 chapters of Lin Feng getting underestimated for no reason every time an encounter happens
I almost believe you☠️
The story is fine and all, but the writing quality is not the best.
In almost every chapter you have dialogs like this:
-"How about all of you first announce your name?" Melody said telling them to reveal their names to her.
"Alright. "
Vincent, John, Iris, Varth, Leilani, and Nevis revealed their names to the fairy, taking several seconds to do so. -
You often have a lengthy exposition to a topic, then somebody mentions it in almost the same words and then you get a reply often in the same style. So you read the same words 3 times in a row. The example above is just one without spoilers, but once you notice this pattern, it gets exhausting to read.
Also, dialogues are far too "detailed". Where a normal, short answer would be the norm and perfectly fine, here you have long answers with all the details so the conversations dont "feel" like conversations normal people would have.
Big if lol
The second year arc is a landmine of bad writing and character development
Got better after... the incident but the damage was already done
Mmmmmmmm getting triggered... Why.. Just why.. Why would anyone think they have any room for discussions after violating someone.. Like it was a little slap to the face. Where did this kid's morals go? I thought he was somewhat respectable after being hesitant to even be apart of a robbery...
There seems to be a slight decline in translation quality around halfway through the novel
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Overall a good start for what could be a great novel though I am taking 1 star away for that bogus intro chapter that they titled chapter 1 so we only got 39 chapters which is disappointing
This book is one of the best books I've ever read. The characters are interesting and you end up actually caring about what's goin to happen to them. The world building is great and I personally don't have any problems with the tranlation quality. would definitely recommend you read this as it is a very good book all in all.