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Aight, the story makes a whole lot of sense so far and would like to see more chapters Keep writing chief, you're a good and a unique writer ??
It’s quite good, not much I can critique. Appreciate the story and beginning it’s quite unique. Also the writing quality doesn’t give me epilepsy reading it. It’s flows well and it’s immersive. Nice man.
really good work, and thank you for your effort in writing such stories
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hmmm very interesting concept, I like where this is going. All I can say is keep it up. I'd really like to see more of this because this is pretty cool. Really looking forward to more. Your descriptiveness is also really captivating, and your grammar is pretty good. I'll rate this a 5.0
THIS IS SOO GOOD WHATT!! I FOUND THIS BY ACCIDENT AND NOW IM IN LOVE!!!! thank so much for writing and I hope you continue doing so ????
Does the MC really keep dating that yandere girl who would even believe tho whole love at first sight thing if this is real life I would just call the police and might turn asexual, still good story I guess
Nice story, the pacing is just right, not too fast and not too slow either.the Mc's abilities are overpowered but stay within reason. they are also fun to play with. though when he got that nerve control skill I wonder why he never thought about increasing his reaction speed or even his perception of time, that would've been OP. all in all, it's a good read for a Naruto fanfic. keep it up!
We can see the influence of several novels in this story and it still have its own originality, its in fact a good reading.The story is narrated in the point of view of the MC with very unique since I cant remenber any other.The only flaw I have to point is that the author is stingy with the details. If the story take a few lines to describe events like how the magic awakening occur or when he enter an place discribe it briefly the novel will be even better.
Nice read with unique plotline and narrations. The setting and characters are also mich more admirable. Kudos , the book has much potentials so I hope you'll keep updating
it is a very good novel a I think the author can uplode a new chapter I think so