Il a peut-être besoin d'un checkeur ;) Ce n'est pas toujours évident, quand on débute, de focaliser son attention sur la trame narrative et en même temps sur l'orthographe :) Mais c'est sûr, ça viendra avec le temps ! Bon courage !
"You bastard!" Crocodile growled out in frustration. "Take this!" he yelled out letting his anger get the better of him as he raised his right hand and turned it into a spearhead made of sand before stabbing it into the ground while yelling out.
Penjual – pakai es gak
Lucas stood slowly, reminding them of just how big he was. He set his coffee down on the table, feeling the short hair at the nape of his neck bristling. He smiled without fangs, not having them yet, but the wolf smile was all threat. He didn't need a mirror to know his brown eyes were waking up, warming with amber-gold. His voice came out rough and deep. "I'm sorry, little man, I don't think I heard you correctly. Do you want to say that again?"
"That is me" a middle aged man, matching the pictures, replied
The electronic piano, piano, and violin were really too easy for Tang Huai!
"What's with baldy? He seems pissed at me." I asked remembering this morning.
mental strength: 10,1
"Ladies and gentlemen of the Yun family thank you for coming for this special event that will decide the future of our family begins" Announced the old man with many expectations.
Sage
She heads over to the couch to sit down. I rush up the latter. Once in in my room I pick out my classic red and black plaid shirt with black jeans and holes on the knees. As I rush back down the latter I noticed Fiona kinda looking sad. "Yo Fiona what's up why do you look so down?" "Oh I'm just bored." She said with a really fake smile. "Oh okay, so what do you wanna do?" "I don't know that's why I came here cause you always have the best ideas." "Alright I have an idea
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