What is even going on? I enjoy my fair share of garbage novels and generally don't review them negatively, but this one makes no sense. Nothing is explained whatsoever. What is this tower? What are these territories? Where are they fighting? Another example of confusion: Guy uses a 10000 times card on a newborn wolf to grow it to a youth. But 10000 times what? Times 1 second or 1 minute or 1 day? No one knows. Even garbage novels need to have some semblance of sense. Absolute vomit tier novel.
r u sure all this people commenting on your review’s section not your dummy account. all of em lvl 1 and give a highly positive output ??
u know what? i think qi dian should really filter anyone who makes a mess here.. if even this book is accepted here... then i can become an author too and all of us
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you ????????????????
This is only a review on eight somewhat short chapters, but the story is well on its way to the main section (from the synopsis anyway) to the forming and fighting of Maddoxx’s squad.The writing is pretty average, it’s neither terrible nor great. There are a few missed capitalizations, but other than that, sentences are structurally correct. For details on the settings or mood, it’s mostly sound effects that are employed, so other forms of showing the story rather than telling could be added.Story-wise, the plot is understandable, but it has a few gaps that might be filled in later such as why Mr. Golden has a specific interest in making Maddoxx into a man and whether he’s done this before in some kind of program rich men like to pass the days doing; why Dimitri is in the cell/how he got there, if there are any other prisoners undergoing the same thing as Maddoxx if not, why single him out for torture; why the Russian mafia is breaking in and the possible connection to Dimitri.The torturing is somewhat reminiscent of Tokyo Ghoul. The character development from the torture could be a little more dramatically and believably done. Or perhaps added to that, more backstory and fleshing out of the MC. To simply say he’s an average dude with no dreams isn’t enough. Everyone has some kind of wish if not a dream, or some desire or hope. If he’s really so apathetic, then there should be some reason or experience that makes him that way. Or with the torturing, build up that madness and growth bit by bit.Dimitri at this point is better fleshed out/original than the MC. The defining reason why is his swallowing of the “gum.”I can definitely see this becoming a good story once the plot gaps, descriptions, and character development improves/get filled in. It’s just a few steps away, but nice work so far!
This is very good. The characters are fleshed out, there are interesting dynamics between their personalities, and the MC has a cool power. This, so far is an excellent set up to a story, that unfortunately seems to have been dropped.
If your wondering why the review only has two of the sections filled out that are not in the middle its because I didn’t read the story. The reason you ask. Well the first chapter of the actual story is locked and I like many others am not going to waste my coins and fast passes on a story I can’t preview. My advice would be to open some free chapters and let people get a feel for it before you start charging them.
Nice novel yeah !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Funny enough and a true harem.Maaaannnnnn love this sh*t hehehehehehehehehehehehhehehhehhehehehhehehhehehhehehehehhehehehhehehehehehhehehehhehehehehehehehehehehheehehehehehehehehehehehhehhehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe
A disappointing and underwhelming read, made worse by the injection of slang hero names being thrown everywhere. Great if you can remember the new names of heroes, terrible if you get confused.
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Good story, but it kinda put me down when one of his disciple die in his own sect, when the MC was actually in the same place, and know there are enemy in his own backyard but to late to safe his disciple, he cannot protect the disciple even though he own the most powerfull system building sectOkay, i know that the MC was still weak and that accident might get the MC more determined to get stronger, but i don't know just don't like the kind of story that sacrifice someone just to get MC more determined or more stronger just for that kind of reason.But if you can ignore that kind of story then this novel was actually quite good, but for me, i am gonna drop it
This is a different type of story I read. It's very interesting to read. It has new aspects that I never read before. I really enjoy reading this novel.