Inevitable_Chicken
If you are here, please give it a try, it's good(I think) and I'm still trying to improve, so I'm sure it'll get better.thank you for reading.
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WARGROUNDS is a work of fiction by SilentMild. The audience of this work are fans of games that has battlegrounds, weapons, and powers. As a man born during the 80s, I'm not fond of these kind of game inspiration novels but reading one was kinda fun, I've got to admit. The major flaw I found was that a ton of characters were introduced right off the start, especially chapter one and chapter two. Repetitive usage of the common dialogue tag, "said" could also be seen throughout. If I were to give a suggestion, it would be best to replace "said" with some sort of emotion to further elaborate the feelings of the characters.I can't say much, since again, I'm not born in this kind of era. I'm not used to playing these kinds of games, but then again, I enjoyed reading it. As for other flaws, I found some grammar mistakes but they are only a few. -Dann Giovanni
Wow!!! Great job, Author! Kudos for the plot and character development.... I’m nOt so familiar with the VR plot line but you made it so well, I can’t help but get hooked!!! It reminded me of the anime Darwin’s Game....Goodluck.... ?❤️?
Is the novel dropped or something!?
Okay webnovel has officially sunk to a new low this novel is essentially an exact copy of another anovel called an immortal emperor’s self cultivation but with the mc and his friends and parents having a different name. I wonder if it’s just going to blatantly pirate novels with a few changes with the names of sects and a few of the characters
I'm on board with a story if their mc has lighting powers. Always been a fan of it. Having an mc that's a different nationality other than Asian is a bonus. Webnovel needs more diversity. If you see the author see this, keep up the good work!
Less cringe than the mainstream ones but don't be happy, it's not by much.
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Only read the frist 20 chapters but so far it’s kinda the same as tale of demons and gods it’s so similar that I thought it was the original so im going to keep reading in hopes that it will differ later on if not ill drop it
I don't know why it did not get chosen it's great lol why do you guys always skip on these. everyone come ready it it's amazing you will not regret it.
People say this is worse then other similar stories like gamers of the underworld but it has a more relatable main character. A better story progression. Far better world building despite some inconsistencies. This story will definitely draw you in and you definitely find it harder to drop then it counterpart. I’m sad to see it stopped updating though
