Oh guys, I Hope you like my storyI tired to write it Clear, and so I hope you like it.First chepter is not good enough but the story will Develope in the future
I'm really enjoying this story and very interesting to read... good job author ? ??
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Look everything is developing at its own pace good for the 2nd chance rom genre. But the problem is ml. He doesn't understand boundaries. Not accepting her unwillingness for the intimacy. Don't u realise how severe this matter is not listening to her no and let things go on his own will. Can't u see fl was forced already 3 times. 1st just before the divorce in Japan trip, 2nd in his house, 3rd on the last day of the pretend marriage. If u gonna say she did it. she was but not initially. He was was too persistent not listening to her so she had to give in. Look I don't have any problem with the scene, I know it's rom genre but that doesn't give it pass to let it happen. Not understanding boundaries, not respecting her boundaries is a big no. U have to work on it. At least give a sign that u have read this AUTHOR.
The story has a rich world building and amazing characters that are well thought out and developed! The author possess a rich vocabulary and strong grammar skills, making the story an enjoyable reading experience. If you guys have a little bit of time, I strongly recommend giving this novel a try!
I love this novel plot it is perfectly written by the author it has everything that makes me keel reading I would advice people to read it if they like fantasy it has the perfect elements world-building and allGood job author?
at chapter 200 now. this book is extremely interesting. the system he has is pretty similar to the other system novels out there, but the story is where it shines. As far as the novels that I read go, there aren't many (or any) that have the mc as a member of a gang and stay with it. his gang isn't some hidden society of martial arts experts that the mc takes over because he was chosen by the gangs inheritance, spirit, etc. it's a street gang plain and simple. filled with highschool age kids who don't exactly know what they are doing, they just want a place to belong. flying by the seat of their pants they are battling against other gangs for money, reputation, and territory. but it's a little more complicated when the mc accidentally kills a classmate, turns an opponent into a werewolf, special forces federal agents arrive in town, and a criminal group of killers show up. Mc has a lot of enemies, but none of them are the stereotypical arrogant rich kids most mc fight on and on with.the world is sort of futuristic, but more along the lines of a different timeline than actually being in the future. all the countries agreed to shelve and outlaw hot weapons(as in guns, canons, etc.) and so the only weapons people can legally have are cold weapons, knives for instance. this makes everything a lot more realistic when people using martial arts starts going up against big forces in a modernish world. of course to make up for the lack of research going into weapons, genetics have turned some humans into weapons, called altered.the only problem I have with the story is it's erratic updating times. per week it updates roughly the same amount of chapters. but by the day, the 1-3 chapters could be released all at once at 8 in the morning, spread out through the day or split up and get one in the morning and one at night. it feels like the chapters are being released as they are finished, rather than being a few chapters ahead and having them scheduled. that's not a bad thing, it just makes the updating not stable day to day. It just leaves me wondering if we are going to get the second chapter that day or the next day will have 3 chapters. with me being so into the story waiting for each chapter to release, it can be agonizing. on the other hand if you take the number of releases by the week it does seem pretty stable. they haven't missed a day yet.as for editing, it's very good. you will rarely find a mistake grammatically speaking. editor has been slipping as of late but it isn't to the point that it would impact the reading experience.all in all this is one of the better stories on this site, and it's relatively original story is refreshing. it has a lot of potential to run very long, but I can see it easily getting repetitive. it'll be interesting to see how the author deals with that. all this being said I would strongly recommend anyone and everyone to read this novel.
Pretty solid Novel, to similar to mushoku tensei too give it higher rating but I'm looking for More
The author is good. I don’t usually read fantasy but Kai has me hooked. I love the character development done for him. He feels authentic
been reading this masterpiece for almost an year now.... really enjoying it but MR AUTHOR only updates a single ch its annoying..
Im torn. on one hand, the book is really good. (other than the odd fixation on having the scale of everything seemingly made to be Kilometers, which I question if the author really grasps the scale of how large that is... But it doesn't make the story bad to read, so im ignoring it.) I also appreciate the focus on the story and not making it a harem. pacing feels a bit off at times but overall enjoyable read. On the other hand, this story is about as money hungry as an author could ever be... half the authors' messages are asking for gifts and extra money donations. I understand wanting to make a profit off a book, totally understandable. But after a certain point, it's just ridiculous. I usually buy privilege chapters on stories I enjoy, but this is probably the first story in at least 3 months I refuse to do so. the price for 2 chapters ahead is 50 (most authors had it for unlock cost +1 but sure, thats fine), but then unlocking the 3 after it is over 300? Like seriously? Im all for supporting authors, but that is just insane. Dont even get me started on tier 3 that jumps to over 800 coins.
"Really Sir? So I was not a homo even though I'm homo? I knew it." Mr. Sangefull answered panicly.