Oh my days bro. When is something gonna happen in this book. I don't like characters who are manipulative but at least make the MC unique or something. Bro's a pushover who does everything others want from him without any rewards even at his own detriment. It annoys me man.
AWESPEC GOT ME PRAYING TO THE GODS
how is this a continuation of energy system when its not even completed yet?
waiting for more chapters after 278
D*mn the updates are f*ck*ng slow
Thanks man
If you're here than that means *looks at the category* oh o f*ck*ng course it's YAOI
I found fault at every chapter, plot, arc and even characters, it feels like it was written by a child T_T, the events came out of nowhere just for the sake of unnatural "hype" his interaction with his parents are cringe, it's like they came out of fantasy on how everyone wants they're parents to be. I'm still hoping for it to be better, I'll try to persevere, the first 100 chapters are unbearable to read. Very. It made me feel dumb, as the person below said, there was a lot of bad decisions, like if he was trying to hide his identity why try to come in and out of the main gate, if he was trying to hide his identity, why do "this and that." A lot of poorly explained scenarios, incomplete, like you don't even know how his armor exactly looked like, does it cover face? I believe it wasn't mentioned, I just assumed it does since people didn't recognized him. His voice too, his saber technique too, the software wasn't explained well too, like how it works and such, can people view his log, how does other user exactly observe him pulling chests. Too dumb, too many plotholes, severely lacking of details, too much needless supposedly "developmental" emotional scenario, it's also wasn't explained why the f is xu ling so attached to him, like it came out of nowhere.All in all, the reason I'm hating this novel was because of those dumb decisions he keeps on making. Hope it gets better later on T_T
Wow can i have that kind of brain for my exams especially math
I only want to know if ahn xun have a story love line.
Please give us further summary, the summary above is not interesting. I have feeling this novel will be good. (sorry for the critism and thank you)
A refreshing genre for qidian novel, this novel revolved around Jack, an abused kid going for lifetime adventure, meeting foster parents, played awesome baseball, when I say adventure its nothing to do with sword or dragon literally, however compare than facing this types of challenge, Jack story is kind of heartwarming, sad, happy, bewilderedly, and all types of emotion flavours, I kind of love it. I give five star just for Jack braveness and
wimpyness.. Guys read it, it will not waste
your time.