It's a really good novel, if anything should be said about it is, It's really well written, has a good, and more importantly, continous development. it doesn't falter, and stuff happens and gets done. however, as there are few chapters where characters interact with each other, there is a lack of knowledge we as readers have about them. but it will solve itself in the next few chapters, I believe. the same goes with the world background, although you can tell it's almost the same world as where we live. In the beginning, there is some stuff hinting that this world has a supernatural/magical/fantastical side to it, but it just hasn't appeared yet. this makes the novel lack its own unique approach. although it isn't bad to (sometimes) not have a unique approach, I feel that this novel could benefit very much from it.maybe make it so that some specific people can use magic, and there are the typical magical races, but they are hidden in the Amazon Jungle, or they are in a deep slumber waiting for the so called "awakening of spiritual energy". there are many more things that can be done.author, you can freely use my ideas if you want, I can also give you more if you need/want. just comment under any of my comments or even under this review. you can also contact me in Discord @NaruSenku. I'm always willing give a helping hand to authors.
I really love Eden… I love the plot too
Although the comparison of their forces was far from Hitler's army, namely 1:10. Victory is still a mystery because at that time, the entire country was destroyed. "
"Give me another potions, Jester."
Whatever had him had struck him with it's other hand, and moved him, for Casper was next to his friends. Except, Max was missing. Casper shook Chance frantically as he searched the room with his eyes. Some of the lights were on and he still couldn't see Max. Where was he? Was he Ok? Did he just wander off? He then looked at the former bullies sleeping bag and saw blood on the pillow. He had indeed been taken.
*Saiyan blue has been sealed because the Host Realm Stage is still low it will be sealed until Host Realm Stage has reached Ancient Platinum Stage. Host could only use Super Saiyan 1fst transformation until 3rd Transformation only.
Setelah sampai, seperti rencana sebelumnya ardan akan membeli digital cashier, toko yang menjual digital cashier ternyata punya pemerintah setempat, masuk akal karena digital currency di kendalikan pemerintah bukan swasta, sedangkan bank hanya menyimpan barang fisik saja sekarang. Terdapat 3 jenis, basic Cashier, complete cashier, dan adjustable cashier.
I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed
Only shooting stars break the mold
Only shooting stars break the moldSomebody once told me the world is gonna roll me
Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid
Judging by the hole in the satellite picture