Rusted
loving it ...
The story's catched my attention
the book was good. Thanks author ?
The premise was interesting, but the story telling could be better. I was actually looking forward to the story's blurb. The actual story might still be some chapters in.
The blurb and the story line is interesting. Can't wait to read what happens next. Update soon ??
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An intriguing novel, no doubt about it. The plot is uniquely crafted, allowing us to uncover mysteries alongside the protagonist as he discovers them himself, though we occasionally receive an additional clue or two.
Bai Yan starts as a transmigrator from Earth into a parallel modern world where the supernatural exists. Initially, he is relatively stable and somewhat nihilistic, but as the story progresses, he undergoes a significant mental transformation. His desire to see those he deems evil suffer intensifies over time, and his scope of violent thoughts expands.
At the beginning, the only indication of this change is the man at the DHA, Lin Bian, who disapproves of Bai Yan because he "smells of madness." Later, Bai Yan himself realizes that his thoughts are becoming more abnormal.
By the chapter I last read, there’s a suggestion that Bai Yan may have traveled back in time after failing to achieve something, though he doesn’t recall it.
So far, the gradual psychological changes in the "operators" are well-paced and add a dynamic element to the story, making it engaging as he tries to keep them pleased and maintain their positive moods.
Actually, this is a rather enjoyable read. The narrative flows smoothly, despite the familiar premise, and it holds a certain charm.
The narrative isn't terrible, but it lacks exceptional qualities. Most male protagonists (apart from one) come across as obnoxious, arrogant, and jealous, solely fixated on lusting after the protagonist's love interests. The main character isn't clueless, but he tends to回避 addressing others' emotions and remains passive, refraining from报复 or恨意. The author attempts to portray him as intelligent, yet his inability to leverage his influential royal background – using it to uncover his parents' murderers – feels implausible.
The female characters are one-dimensional and lack depth, but their blandness isn't overly bothersome. The author consistently tries to create tension and excitement, making each volume a somewhat painful read, knowing full well that the cliffhangers won't lead to satisfying volume conclusions.
In summary, while not bad, the story doesn't quite stand out among its peers. It fares better than some generic isekai tales like "Isekai Wa Smartphone," but falls short compared to masterpieces like "Overlord," "Isekai Tensei Soudouki," or "Sevens."
The main character is incredibly humorous, as her actions and thoughts often have an ironic contrast. In fact, if I were in her shoes, I might exhibit similar behavior. After experiencing death nine hundred and ninety-nine times, it's only natural to develop a strong dislike for all the male leads.
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Where can I find this new version?
I counld not find this novel after the "great reset" but now i found it
I planning to do the same as you bro i wish to learn japanese for anime, korean for some murim and regression fantasy novels and chinese for Ri.
