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Hi! I should say the way you write is so smooth and decent, it gave me chills when I read how you describe the background of the world's. And the story build is really interesting. I got sucked in from when the will of world is introduced and when Reed goes in and you know what xD *spoiler* lol. This story is a gem for fantasy lovers and motivates other fantasy writers that are on here. Thank you for such a crafted story. And good luck for the future.
This book is a good attempt at writing but there are plenty of mistakes that make it hard to understand what is being said. For instance, the pov changes are quite wonky and confusing, characters genders are mixed up, tons of tenses that are misused, and sentence structures that makes no sense. It's an admirable attempt at writing by not a non native English speaker. I know I wouldn't be able to write a coherent story either. Best of luck and keep improving! I'll check back in the future and update as needed.
Usually, when I read these novels it's to see murder and ra*e. So far this novel has none of that and for that you get a 0 star score from me. 4.2/5
Good novel keep the good work and thank you for your hard work <3
Keep writing please! As a premiere SSS Potatomon, I require tons of chapters as evolution material, and this is quality work. Loved it! Now I just need to finish writing 140 characters.
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The novel has so much potential but it just gets caught up on the worst things possible. After a while cultivation doesnt exist and filler takes its place, at one point he goes up one minor realm and gains no powers in 70 chapters, That is just beyond disgraceful in my opinion. The highest cultivation realms are also just never explained, even the highest ranked disciple in his sect is in soul formation realm, but every elder and person he meets later on is at minimum 2 major realms ahead, which makes no sense sect wise. Even the demoness never has her realm revealed and is somehow like 10 major realms ahead of the mc at all times, with no progress in their relationship to look forward to either. I think the novel has immense potential and there are some great characters, but it just feels like there is little to no pursuit in actual cultivation, and instead a pure focus on just filler character interactions, which lose their flare a couple hundred chapters in. Thanks for reading
I like this type of novel, like IRAS, i hope you continue doing it, do not stop updating the novel plz, good luck author. .......................
Disgusting story, apparently some people think abuse is entertaining and "character building" this story makes me want to vomit.