well where to begin. let's start with the good. the story and idea are a little unique compared to other system stories up to chapter 13. my main complaint about this one that is really holding it back for me, is that the author is writing like someone with ADHD or ADD. what would be a few chapters in normal books is a few paragraphs that is immediately shoved aside the second the next point appears on the horizon. it really ruins the flo of reading .
I really like the story and the pace of the world building, it also has nice and not too many interactions with characters, also I noticed that the mc isn't dumb like other authors would do with their mc.
Good, but expecting more, I think author should release 2 chapter per day, very interesting story all the best, bring more character so that the story is interesting, tell about farzana allahamahut alban, so it will be more interesting
I feel like this novel is one of the best. Not only does the author integrate childlike themes together with ***** ones, they also make it so the MC can always improve without it sounding completely ridiculous.
the book very good, the book very good, the book very good, the book very good, the book very good, the book very good, the book very good...
Ayeee what a good read! :DThe writing is amazing, and the story is absolutely interesting hehe!This story definitely has a lot of potentials! :DGreat work, author! <3
I really don't understand , There's no woman? no city? So where is the baby come from? can man get pregnant? are they even human? where are they??u200d??u200d?
i have no way to express how much more recognition this story deserves, i have read hundreds and hundreds of books online and off, and still in the short time of a day or two this jas become one of my favorite books if not just straight up my favorite. if your just thinking on reading this right now, browsing the comments deciding on whether or not this is worth your time, please just give it a chance, it is.
this is already good from the start, please do a mass release.............................................,.................................
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I am very impressed with this novel. The characters are well thought out and I love the fact that, while the mc is becoming powerful, it feels right and it doesn’t feel out of place. The world is interesting and I can’t wait to explore more in the upcoming chapters. The mc isn’t crazy or kills anyone if they look at him funny. He’s a normal guy but very determined and willing to be ruthless as well as merciful depending on the situation. Can’t wait to read more!