read and enjoy .
first chapter is good. if the novel is done right it can be a good novel. always liked novels like this. modern day with system that's about business and such. hope it goes well.
definitely worth the read, very fun and well put together story with dark themes and very interesting characters. sets up to be a good adventure, has a good mystery and really has a fantasy adventure vibe i was not expecting based on the title. pleasantly surprised, really good work, keep it up!
What a name.
Devil
"So you are going to kill me?" Leon asked unconcerned.
When Charles and Arjun finally reached the field where the other boys were, the middleman of the three men called out, "Alright boys, over here!"
Hearing the sound of fighting in the background, Wanda looked to see two dots hovering in the pillars of smoke several blocks away. Her face contorting to one of pure determination, she shot off into the air using her gifted energy.
*Oooong~*
You're bundled up now, wait till you get older
The mission was impossible from the start but he still supported his crazy twin. At ngayon, pinagsisisihan na niya ito.
Sinamaan ng tingin ni Andy si Ark. "Ang ano nanaman? Tumahimik ka na! Isa ka nalang!"