Obviously I have to give myself 5 stars. To anyone reading this, thank you! I'm primarily writing because I want to, but sometimes that motivation runs out and randomly comes back. So if sometimes I randomly disappear for a few weeks... You know why.Also, I don't mind reviews if they're harsh and give me feedback/pointers, any are accepted! Side Note: This is the first novel I've ever written so it will be a rough ride, if you do end up sticking with me, thank you.
This story is relatively fast paced which a lot of people including myself like a lot. However, the lack of world building really gets to me. In any cultivation novel, or any novel with supernatural powers, there is a power system with somewhat clear rankings. For this novel though it seems the author comes up with new realms as they’re writing. The MC’s character is fine. Basically any generic Chinese cultivation novel mc who is ruthless and kills decisively. The biggest flaw, for me though is the horrendous world building and lack of clear cultivation ranks. I only read up to chapter 70 so maybe in the future chapters it got better, but that was my limit. The introduction of realms, without knowing how far it was from the MC’s current realm, was frustrating. If you like fast paced, fast food novels with a bunch of idiotic background characters, then this is for you. I would have actually enjoyed this novel if there was proper world building. Some times you just want to turn off your brain and read fast food novels.
I loved this novel, but I need more than what was left by the ending. What happened after yin stabbed himself in the heart? What is the meaning of the system saying live and then the author stating it's too late for that. we know he's dead, but was he given the proper honor he deserved, or was there a way for yin to return through the system? So many questions left unanswered.
In love with this story. After reading bitter sweet I've become a fan of your writing, from the character description to the story development everything is outstanding. I highly recommend this book to readers.[img=recommend]
why did they pick a book from a such a cliche and untrustworthy author? **** don't even know how to properly end a book. Just drop the old one and start a new book which is a re-skin of the old book with only one difference " an OP ability". Really a dumb qidian.
Very well written and thought out concept. I thought it would be about a guy who got constantly cucked in life, but sometimes being cucked has advantages
Even though I’m a wow fan, it doesn’t look like to be that good... I might give it a shot later but too much fan fiction. I can’t blame people for being upset over this
Genuinely a good story. I thought that the game world would degenerate into the common tropes we've seen so often, but it's mainly a side hustle. The story focuses on the real world. There are no arrogant young masters, no face-slapping, no cliches. It's a pretty simple cultivation story, which I really enjoy.
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did webnovel releasing same novels with minor changes... I remember reading same plot novel before...
anyway... it's not interesting to me,
it's the same novel as before just changing names and did some minor changes...
I am still waiting the novel name with ' I am spokesperson of grim reaper' which also have revenge plot like this...
If you don't read it you are going to miss a great Novel from your life..
This is a really interesting story and I hope I can have the chance to read more than these 40 chapters in the near future. The system is unique!!! It's interesting how he didn't lose his humanity even though he isn't a human anymore. I disagree with all these people that say it was stupid to help the fleeing mother and daughter. It's understandable how he still cares about humans and he tries to help their living conditions every chance he gets. Just because he became a vampire some people think he has to turn, in no time, to some kind of monster that cares about nothing and bring calamities right and left just for his satisfaction...... these people should check their morality and most of all their mentality. Fucking psycos!!!!