Writing a review because the great plot deserves an official review (with mine just 1 to go)
I can't say it's novelty as it is the result of stitching various plots already known, but the end result is great.
The story per se is good.
The writing quality could definitely be better, but bearable (definitely not like some mtl) (I also think it improved?!).
A racist book, a racist author, If I could I would give this book a negative review. Calls black people "slaves" and said that God spurned them. Qidian/Webnovel has a habit of removing bad reviews so I'll come back and post my review if I see its gone. #IGotTime
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I was able to read close to 200 chapters but could not force myself to read further mc is like a brick emotionally so I could not continue reading because of that
I think this novel is not so bad, at first author will give us slow and boring scene, but at somepoint theres some surprises in it, it good lite reading, i cant hold my self smile from the interaction between ML, althought Author wrting sometimes hard to understand a bit but the story line is good, keep update it thor [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I admit that my expectations weren't high when I read the name of the novel and it's description. But as it turns out, the novel has been a good read so far, but I do find it a bit suspicious that the translator decided to stop releasing chapter a whole 5 chapter before what we were supposed to get. 15 chapters has been released so far.
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This is an interesting concept that I hope can rise on this site. I feel like Lance will rise to bigger things as time moves forward. It's okay to be scared of things that happen and he is no different.
What a whaste !!! How many floors should a bag of rice have, how many floors should a bag of rice have, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should you wash a bag of rice, each grain is muddy, to whom you gave a bag of rice!Spicy Tiansai! ! !Jiraiya swimming in the sea of dragons and angelica, popsicles melting under the street lamp
man.... I feel that the mc is very passive when it comes to women and he is also so disinterested in the world that it gets boring, and there was almost no character development in these 50 chapters, his only development was when he saw thousands of women in franssi from the devil's curse but then there was no character development and he doesn't take matters from life to death seriously, like he walks into a den full of powerful monsters like he's walking in an amusement park, even though he's in the early stages of cultivation that's not good at all it's so boring I'm here to see how far he will change his passive behavior and character development
The only new novel that I've enjoyed for a while mc a bit dumb but not really that stupid pick this novel.................. (-_-) (<_>) hehe
Grammar has flaws and the author should use grammarly or an editor, however the story itself makes up for it so I suppose it's an alright read.