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thanks for bringing the translation
I didnt get very far in this. The chapters and storyline hurt my head too much. The storyline seems too jumbled up and hazy. The ending is hazy too. It's like the writing didnt want to be translated. I dont like.
a very good summoning related book ... well written and good story..update is also consistent sogive this book a try
not enough backstory of how, when, where and what actually happened the day she was reborn..my guess she's reborn 3+ years before around the time the black pills start circulating, if it's correct her father probably isn't a good one and their relationship isn't tight either?
This story plot legit gave a stomachache.
The guy doesn't even know the concept of low-key, he had to seize every chance to show off like a needy kid for attention , the most stupid thing is that he keeps lying and spitting nonsense without considering the consequences if he was found out ,yet everybody believes it like its normal without even trying to find out if its the truth. Even children books arent this naive .Fk ruined my day again.
This probably got picked because the mtl is already readable so the entire book can be easily edited to milk money.
Anyways it goes even more cringe with the bashing of other countries like Korea, Japan, Western countries, etc. You know how Chyna Numba 1 stories go.
Ignoring that, there are literally no compelling characters. MC is basically emotionless for the reader to project on to, and all the side characters are beautiful women. Gets old and tiring really quickly. Villains are literally cardboard cartoon cutouts. In fact the MC is a better villain than the actual villains with how he acts (ie: psychopathic and sociopathic).
What can I say, I see Yandere I read, this was really interesting, so I won't say much but the MC is like Emiya Shirou if he went insane on his heroes' routes, but yeah this was fun, the system is also interesting as well too, the mc is also cruel, and a chapter a day so it's all good for me.
the are so many character names start with Lin that you will be confused half the time there is no World building
Thanks for pickup this novel. Please pick more female protagonist novel. this novel has comedy, adventure tags remind me of side character which is my cup of tea. love this novel
I will touch a few aspects of the novel:
First comes story development - While some people prefer to see quick power up boosts, I appreciate the slow development of the story. I firmly believe MC needs time to develop even if he is a genius - it makes no sense if he suddenly becomes the strongest in the world.
Second comes romance - From the former novel of the author I believe he is against useless harems with countless useless and weak wives everywhere. However, in 60 chapters only, MC already has "collected" 2 wives, making me wonder if it's a harem system instead of a villain one. Hopefully, author won't turn it into another generic harem novel, where every woman is completely useless and barely gets story time after he conquers her. As MC should already know about all outstanding women in advance (if I got it right he is in a world of a novel he has read in his previous life), maybe he has already set his eyes on a few women?
Last aspect I want to talk about is the villain aspect - Although MC seems not to hesitate to kill some men, he seems to have a soft spot for women - he never considers killing the heroines of the protagonists he is hunting, insetad, he only tries to charm them first. While it seems to make him seem less vile, I guess its up to author how to set his characteristics as he doesn't really have to be a merciless mass murderer in order to be a villain.
I feel it's too soon to comment about the system setting, as too much info is lacking - we don't know the criterions that need to be met in order to kill a protagonist, we don't know how the lottery works (somehow he always gets 2 prizes every time insetad of one) and so on, I just assume author will reveal it through the story.
Keep up the good work and good luck to the author, it's a great story!
author didn't plan when writing this, keeps pulling ideas randomly and inserts it to push the story forward, so many inconsistencies, 1st chapter got killed by thief didn't take his ring when he died cause blood reasons... few chapters later kills same thief but gets his stuff from thieves ring... and he locked chapters at ch.40 when the story is this bad...