Good story introduction and development, the story plot is good and the writing quality is recommendable.Overally, the story twists keeps informing.
I really love this plus its a werewolf short story with a good outline ❤️❤️
Writing to get an answerForeword: what im going to say is constructive critisism not hate.Im at chapter 54 now and really enjoying reading it so far, but i feel like when you are describing several thing be it monsters or people the descriptions seem so lacking, like i get not wanting too many words becuase of word limit and price, but it dosent really take many words to give a bit more of a detailed description. For example where im at noe is the part with shadow stalkers and weavers and the description of the weavers is fine i have envisiond what they look like, but same cant be said for the shadow stalkers, with the very limeted/lacluster description we got from them i cant for the love of me envision what its supposed to look like. Im saying this because i want to keep reading, and for all i know it might improve in future chapters, but so far it pains me because i love painting a about what im reading when im reading, with this now(for the most part at least) im unable to do so.
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would have loved to rate this higher, got to about chap 120. It is truly mid, seems just like the writer is just either having fun playing to overdone tropes, or worse yet just an AI.
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Being familiar with Sarthak's work, I find Morgan's ability fascinating. That "notorious criminal" should help his character development. The MC's office-worker vibes also makes him a tad relatable for some.While the premise is intriguing, there is a lot of melodrama. However, this review was posted with only two chapters. I'm sure more depth will be added as the series progresses.A promising start.
Fantastic .
I know this question is dumb but Why would he need to grow as a person when 'he's' a dungeon core? It's like asking a donkey to become a better lion?. Also that paragraph that supposed to be hyping the story always crack me up, I mean "Evil gods introduced new species that have the ability to change the world! will the so called righteous god allow? or nah?" or something so obvious like this?
This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it ??
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How unrealistic, I'm going to complain like other people complain about good characters, I can't take seriously a world where the majority of people are evil.