yulric564
Almost 70 chapters, still this novel didn't enter top 100 rankings.I initially thought that this novel will enter top 20 when it reaches 50 chapters.Story is amazing. Content quality in each chapter is great. Mc is great. Release rate is extraordinary. Still this did not enter top 100.There is something wrong here. I can't find this novel when browsing through eastern fantasy rating section in 4.8 rating region. Generally, on webnovel, I search for original novels by two ways :1. In New novel section (I found this novel here) for new novels. 2. For slightly old and old novels, I search in genre ratings section. This novel is not in this section. If this continues, we might lose an excellent Cultivation novel(rare these days). Author, please don't lose interest, because of this issue. There is something wrong with webnovel(at least in your novel's case).
overall 3/10 wouldn't recommend.Some light spoilers. I have read it to about 588.Writer is willing to come up with a lot of new ideas but he refuses to define them, it's very annoying, for example when he/his pets get a skill his useless phone doesn't explane what they are they, he leaves them ambiguous to define them later as to what the situation needs.He gets a weird letter from his stepmother's father, he doesn't discuss it with her, why? no reason, later he finds out that he (his step mom's father) is stuck somewhere and his step mother is going to a dangerous place to find him, she asks the MC if her father left anything with him, he says no, why? nobody knows, does he even try to figure it out? NO, IT HAS BEEN MORETHAN 400 CHAPTERS! CMON MANNNNN. sorry I lost my self. the dialogue between the MC and the other characters is lacking a lot, for example when any character becomes a little bit more rational and starts to think and ask good questions the writer decides to shut them up with "sense they didn't tell me I can't ask them" line, like Huhh? it's just lazy and annoying.and jäk's arc was so irrational, brainless, stupid and trying too hard, he is an evil man he doesn't abide by laws and kills people left and right on a whim, with a lot of difficulty we were able to capure him and imprison him, now let's cut him a deal if he can capture a 16 year's old kid at the legendary stage and bring him over we will let him be free again to kill more people and cause chaos in this chaotic world.Lastly, why does no one question the MC's powers? they all treat it as a given, I think they know he is the MC.
God I love this book. Can't wait for more.!!!
I'm just wondering how a Ruthless Alpha can save her. I will read to the end. Keep it up, Snow White
I absolutely loved this book….I love all ur books
So, I read your story and it was nice...
Absolutely love love love this book….
Your book was repeating chapters starting from 53. There are multiple duped chapters immediately after the one where they are in an accident together on the way to see Javier's brother Piers. What happened?
This is a Must Read!!!! Phenomenal book. I cannot wait until book 2. Totally mind blown at end. LOVE LOVE LOVE
Awesome book so far!
Too repetitive. Really unlikable characters
Nice story, keep it up
