ambithita why do i want to kill the fl, reading this book makes me want to smash my head with a piece of tofu im gonna die of anger if i keep reading
The orginal work is really well made, however, the translator who worked on this novel should really be scorned and removed from translating any other novels. He was super lazy and ruined the novel by skipping huge portions out of laziness. He really disrespected the author by half assing this translation and expecting ANY sort of payment.
First of all before you read my review i want you all to know that i like books that the MC is a extra in the novel. ex (Author pov, Trash of the count, etc) ,also if you are really lazy to read my review just go to conclusion
for the review i am now at chapter 14 as far as i read the story is slow as the author mentioned in his review,but if you are fine with early chapters of author pov you are going to be fine with it.
in term if writing quality no doubt that this is really to notch rival of top ranking novel right now. Yes there is sometimes that the author spell wrong,but that is common mistake that can be found in most novel. of course it is rarely to see mistake here
As character design well. It is design you could expect from historical western style like gold hair, silver hair. Don't get me wrong it isn't all character that will follow this pattern,but as i am at chapter 14 it is what it is.
as for update heh 14 chaps a week. if not for 5 then whoosh.
as world background i will say that i am just give it for 5 for now. i will not judge the world building of this story by only 14 chapters,but as i am reading it is getting better and better,so 5 for now
overall this novel is really promising as it is my kind of favourite the extra MC. Things that i am sure is truly great for this novel
are Writing quality,updating weekly, and story development. as for world background atleast for me is 4 stars. For the Character design it is more likely to depend on the reader perspective
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Waste of time, I endured till 18 ch in hope It will get better but unfortunately.....
Check for yourself if you patience enough.
Nothing personal author-san but you have to creat a few books before starting posting something here.
Honestly my favorite book ever. The details are great and I love how beautifully the scenery is described. I personally love when the characters go on tangents about their weapons and explain the origins and what they do. I’d love to see someone make an animation that sticks directly to the book word for word. I loved it so much I’m indulging in as much media about it as possible and I’m also researching the other 3 Classical Chinese pieces of literature so I can start reading them next.
It is progressively getting worse. it had a really strong start then it had every wrong move and cliche you can think of nothing makes sense its all just getting a pillow from the sky when your tired its bad.
I like the story so far, the characters are amazing, the plot looks good. its a good book
Read it before, boring and unoriginal, but who cares, my review will be deleted anyway.
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