An amazing story with a well fleshed out protagonist with brain.Hoping we keep moving forward to harem ending. Thanks for the hardwork author.
I really like the creativity of this novel. I enjoy reading the different trails and the thought that went into every detail. But, I wish that the author would make a better effort to clean up and polish his work so that what they have imagined is clearly conveyed through the effective use of Grammer and vocabulary. This is my personal opinion, but maybe the author should focus on the advancement of the story, rather than spending 2 to 3 chapters explaining intimate nights. I just feel that the mature scenes don't need that much detail, and maybe you could shorten it down so that we can get back into the story and enjoy the book. There are more ways to show romance than in the bedroom. Other than that, great detail and good luck on the future chapters.
As a fellow author, it's good to see someone trying to make a story about Three Kingdoms as well. I know that it can be tricky on some parts, but it is fun to write. BTW, I added a Three Kingdoms tag for you.
Rejection is cruel, and I want to feel bad for the mc but he's just too cruel lol. His anger was sort of justified but directing it to the innocent was terrible lol. Good book though
Interesting Novel , keep working bro ...
I answered with panting breath. "Yes, I remember Doc. I saw you have a good time with your assistant in a bathroom."
"Okay Doctor."
"I cannot believe you."
"Woohoo!" she says happily, aloud. "We got ours."
Riku: I had a feeling that you were connected to the fox ever since I saw that red chakra and then I saw that tailed form that you took. I admire that you want to assist him. I have seen that Gaara has a good side and I think that a lot of that is owed to you. I will assist you in protecting the jinchuriki from the Akatsuki.
Their lunch wasn't bad though, it was tasty and Ping noted to herself come back later.
Hulk would be surprised when his fist flew through Ultron's form, the android's body phasing out and losing its physical presence.