Cliche. Peak cultivator reincarnated and gets “op” cultivation technique. Sword intent weak. Cultivation weak. Can’t even use past laws, weak. I’m sure that if your a god reincarnated but let his cultivation be back at the start. You will still retain your understanding of laws. So he can somwhat bend it to his will but not very much. But meh. Story so far is cliche. Also there is many words and sentences that is wrong and does not sound right to me. Before you post your chapters please consider editing it first.Don’t want to be mean but this is so far my opinion of this novel.
AUTHOR WHYYYYY?? Why did you make this so good that it makes it hard to find stories like this.....Def in top 5 easy.. I have read 1400+ mangas and 600+ cultivation and fair share of LN and this is easily in top 5
This is without a doubt one of the better books on this site. Story-wise it is interesting right from the beginning. The pacing is excellent and the concept of the story is refreshingly unique. The writing quality is on point. There is little anyone could say to argue the negative. The grammar and spelling are tight. The formating is structured in a that makes reading easy and the overall quality of English is excellent.The story has enough chapters that new readers don't even have to think about update stability and continuing readers are given the content they crave. The story development is on point. It flows well and nothing feels "grindy
Love this hidden gem. Really good story line stays accurate to details mentioned previously. good grammar have had no problems trying to understand what the author is trying to convey. No boring unnecessary filler almost everything mentioned is important in one way or another. Keeps pulling me back in to read more and more. Considering I read this at work and only had 3 hours the last 2 days and caught up completely and have been waiting for more chapters tells you this is a great novel. Keep up the good work. :)
Love the novel. Obviously smut-oriented so it's gonna be the main focus. Can't wait to see what else you cooking.I personally will stick around until the funny Yandere happens at chapter 200.
So good socially the story progress, nd the bond between the twins its hard to describe just so awesome, can't wait if someday Kyle vets angry for the elite 5 nd starts a rampage nd destroyers the enemy epic its gonna be epic, seriously though author it's awesome, the characters inspire a lot ✔ New concept in reincarnation✔ Protagonist is awesome✔ Awesome world background ✔ Sincere Brotherhood✔ True sibling bonding ✔ Action Just awesomeLike series all of my friends nd I have similar opinion in this case nd its just so good, even the flashbacks r worth reading twice nd more
The main character was way too op for this book to have a good story arc, but the characters were well written, i like op characters in novels, and i think the way they ended the novel was amazing.
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This story is very good, please update!!! Its been very long so I hope the author can release more chapters very soon. ???????????
Very bad grammar and pretty cliche........................................................................................................................
The novel is good, the writing is excellent, the idea is a little original, you can see that the author has talent, but it is very difficult to continue reading, it seems a Chinese novel but better writing, in every chapter the author finds It is a way of humiliating the protagonist, his family or his acquaintances. First he was humiliated by two young men, then by his father, then he and his family were humiliated all over the village, then the family was humiliated by a band of villains, then he was humiliated by the city guards, and now (in part that I am) he and his lord were humiliated by another samurai ... It's a very good novel, but as I said: It looks like a Chinese novel, only with a talented author.
This novel is very daft for several reasons lol it’s almost like the Mc is some form of idiotic masochist and I don’t know the whole point of writing the mc to be like a fool to nerf him or introduce face slapping but it’s quite silly giving someone cheats and not letting them even use anything close to its potential if you couldn’t bear to write an Mc like that then don’t give him the necessary cheats just makes him stupid. For example1. When the Mc is in an inanimate object he can simply tell the system to turn off and awaken his consciousness after a certain period and it’s literally like he just opened and closed his eyes. So why couldn’t he simply stay in one place turn of his consciousness for like 100,000 years and he’ll have more than enough energy to buy everything required to thrive and it’s not like he would be awake or even asleep that long it’ll pass in a literal blink of an eye for him don’t know what he is rushing for but it’s stupid to me a simple cheat he could use to get actually strong but he rather does something silly.2. Worst of all is why did he start cultivating with the absolute worst potential of body there is? It’s sad mad first you abandon the whole energy concept and go the cultivation route then you make the Mc a retard