not a bad fanfic seems to have a lot of potential hope you don't you don't drop seems to be going good from what I can see...…………………………...………...………...……………………...……………………...…………….
IT is a very interesting start, The way the main character first gets his game system is interesting and I'm happy for once, that the girl isn't a complete scumbag like in most stories. The grammar is strange in places, but you can tell this is from someone who's English is their second language and it's great and still readable and enjoyable.
This story is a great disappointment ,I expected much more than that . For a person who was hailed as the strongest in his previous life ,the MC sure is dumb . Not to forget to mention the grammatical errors . Editing ,lots and lots of editing , this story needs a hell lot of editing. The plot is interesting but the characters are horribly designed .
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Okay!!!! Even though i've only read the first eight chapters, i'm already hooked. The idea behind the actual story is amazing and so original!! Don't think i've ever heard of a mafian/italian ghoststory before, lol! And Santo, omg don't even get me started on him! He's such a fun and different character, and i really feel like i actually know him, as i read the pages, which only shows just how amazing and talented the author is! I can't say this enough, i'll recommend this book to everyone! It's absolutely amazing! Can't wait to read the rest <3 <3
Nice work
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This is my favorite developing story. for those reading this ignore the tiny mistakes the story is worth it. im a very impatient person but this has the best story updating progression then the other developing stories. If you can send this author gifts as well. (it might increase the updates hopefully) keep up the good work don
Is good.